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**** - LYKKEN I LIVET - HAPPINESS IN LIFE -




How blessed I am that you are in my life
Amazing grace whistles through the valleys one tune

You make my body sizzle with your kisses
Fireflies light up blazes in a night sky faraway

I enjoying my dreams and fantasies
Where the sunsets and kisses the moon goodnight 

And everything  will happen because of you
Within starlight flashing blossoms explode beautiful 

No mountain's reach so high
On the peak of every promise colours rainbows 

I love you for many reasons
Some beyond the human grasp of reality 

I’ve never had such thoughts before
Holding hands walking away with sunlight 

I listen to the sound of your heartbeat
Golden tasting chocolate melting echoes 

A sweet and soulful symphony
Reaching the highest temple of an angel's choir 

On a thrilling journey to a  lovely place
Distant drum rolls howling chants in winds of time 







A Collaborated Poem 18.12.2015
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :)
(Unrymed Couplet )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/14/2016 4:08:00 PM
This is just lovely. Thank you for posting
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:14:00 PM
- Thump Drag, thanks for beautiful comments and visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/31/2015 2:40:00 PM
Wonderful work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/1/2016 8:40:00 AM
- Dear Sara, thanks for beautiful comments and visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/24/2015 11:39:00 PM
Anne Lise, Wonderful poem. Happy Holidays and Best Wishes!
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Date: 12/25/2015 6:35:00 AM
- Merry Christmas, Irfanulla :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/23/2015 10:17:00 AM
also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated also wishing you all a joyous christmas and a happy new year to come
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Date: 12/23/2015 10:15:00 AM
your ink anne lise just spilled beautiful in this piece truly a pleasure writing with you pal
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Date: 12/23/2015 12:12:00 PM
- Lykken i livet ..... thank you, dear Liam :) - hugs // Ane-Lise :)
Date: 12/22/2015 12:56:00 PM
Pure enchantment from you both! "Walking away with sunlight"...I love that image! Another beautiful collaboration! #7
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:34:00 PM
- Thanks for beautiful comments and visit, Connie :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/22/2015 10:46:00 AM
Dear Anne Lise Simply lovely my friend, a beautiful piece of poetry, a wonderful melting of collaborations, flawless my friend, great job for both of you, thanks for your awesome review of my poems Anne Lise and you have the best of holidays two, take care and hugs right back at you girl, cheri
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:34:00 PM
- Cherl, thanks for beautiful comments and visit :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/21/2015 9:29:00 AM
Wonderful collaboration. That chocolate line is superb. May the Festive be exceedingly fantastic for you Anne.
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Date: 12/21/2015 12:49:00 PM
- Scott, thanks for beautiful comments and visit :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/21/2015 5:25:00 AM
Once again, a beautiful collaboration poem, Anne-Lise and Liam. Congratulations on a wonderful couplet and thank you for sharing. -hugs- T.J
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Date: 12/21/2015 6:54:00 AM
- Thanks for beautiful comments, Teppo :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/20/2015 10:51:00 PM
Ann Lise a beautiful little couplet by you and Liam, I don't usually like reading collaboration poems, simply because I don't feel they are your own, but you two have come together and created such a wonderful read, take care............Vera.
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Date: 12/21/2015 6:53:00 AM
- Vera, thanks for beautiful comments and visit :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/20/2015 7:56:00 AM
This is so beautiful, romantic.
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:17:00 PM
- Thanks for beautiful comments and visit, Susan :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/20/2015 7:09:00 AM
This is a dazzling romantic piece my dear friends, Anne Lise and Liam. I'm always enjoying your fantastic collaboration poem my dear friends. Now, i also know 3 Norwegean words:))) wanting me to visit your country someday. Thanks a lot for sharing! May you have A Very Wonderful Christmas seasons with your family and loved ones too my dear friend, and thank you so much again for sharing your precious time to read my poem, loving support, encouraging comments, friendship etc. God bless!<3Leonora
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:19:00 PM
- Dear Leonora, thanks for beautiful comments and visit :) - .... Yes, 3 Norwegean words ;) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/20/2015 6:28:00 AM
happy sunday with huggs, anne. SOUPIE for you!
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:16:00 PM
- Happy sunday, Nette :)
Date: 12/20/2015 5:08:00 AM
Two poets whom I love and admire. You two...such a delicious treat....Oh....I could quote some lines....but it's just scrumptious in every way. Hugs to you both.
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Date: 12/20/2015 5:56:00 AM
- Thanks for beautiful comments, dear Eileen :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2015 3:14:00 PM
What a great romantic dual piece. Wishing you both a very Merry Christmas and a blessed holiday season. I was just typing this on my other poem and I had an error in posting it. love phyl
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Date: 12/19/2015 4:27:00 PM
- Error here too :(((- Thank you for the lovely Christmas wishes, dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2015 2:17:00 PM
great work as usual anne....that's a powerful scene, you with pen in hand....inspiring liam as you pushes your gift....to even higher levels from which they can never drift....;)
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Date: 12/19/2015 4:21:00 PM
- Thanks for beautiful comments, Eric :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2015 1:05:00 PM
You two have become a fixed act on Soup! I also say fixed, because you truly write as one...your minds always appear to be on the same wavelength. Enjoyed this lovely and romantic collaboration. Best wishes to both of you. Enjoy the weeiend! *** paul
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Date: 12/19/2015 1:12:00 PM
- We are born under the same sky, moon and star :)) - Thanks for beautiful comments, Paul - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2015 7:17:00 AM
Passion and love expressed here congratulations Anne-Lise and Liam for this exceptional write...
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:25:00 AM
- Christmas hugs and thanks, Michael :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2015 6:50:00 AM
Hmmmm! So sweet is this. All the beauty of love is so pleasant.
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:13:00 AM
- Duke, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2015 4:04:00 AM
Climbing the peaks of poetry each time a collaboration of yours is materialized! A seven to each dear Anne-Lise and dear Liam! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:29:00 AM
- Dear friend Demetrios, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/18/2015 11:52:00 PM
What a beautiful collaboration, two poets I admire, one very inspirational poem!
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:29:00 AM
- Christmas hugs and thanks, Arthur - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/18/2015 7:44:00 PM
Botten Anna,Anne Lise,you reminde me The BASE HUNTER.ALBANIAN LOVE FOREVER.
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:26:00 AM
- Christmas hugs and thanks, Dino - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/18/2015 3:05:00 PM
Anne-Lise and Liam . . . A supreme collaboration effort here!! A perfect couplet write that captures "Happiness in Life" so very well. Superb imagery and brilliant diction for sure. "TR"/"FAV"!! Merry Christmas, Gary
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Date: 12/19/2015 6:57:00 AM
- Dear friend Gary, many thanks for visiting "TR"/"FAV" and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/18/2015 12:52:00 PM
Wow! This is a spectacular poem my dear great collaboration really....I enjoyed reading it felt all the romance and all the love....hugs / / :D
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:28:00 AM
- Christmas hugs and thanks, Dalia :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/18/2015 11:19:00 AM
so much affection and charm in this pice, anne... this collab is ohh so endearing... happy friday and huggs!
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:27:00 AM
- Christmas hugs and thanks, Nette :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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