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11.01.2025

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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Frozen ornaments with fierce tears Swallowing the lie raw Life's fake comedy discomfort and deterrence Prefer the stories - grisly

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Date: 1/21/2025 1:29:00 PM
Anne-Lise, the picture is quite striking. The poem covers a lot of different things that I can relate to. Glad it's short so we don't suffer too much while reading. It's a great contrast to pleasantry!! Smiles!
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Date: 1/13/2025 1:25:00 PM
Awesome bite dear Anne-Lise. hugs! :)
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Date: 1/12/2025 2:03:00 PM
We have stray cats who have been visiting our back yard. I set out food. water and warm places for them, I know one of the cats seems never to leave and now considers this his home, but no matter how I wish to have him come inside, he refuses. I call him Little Lion. I've seen the way he looks at the birds! I try to give him enough food to not crave sparrow or dove. I hate it when I find a pile of feathers in my yard :/
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Date: 1/11/2025 9:47:00 PM
Prefer the stories-grsley.Like it.
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Date: 1/11/2025 2:02:00 PM
A fav for me! I love it! <3
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Date: 1/11/2025 12:59:00 PM
I wouldn't wanna be a mouse with dis cat in da house. Fosho
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2025 1:06:00 PM
- ...that mouse wouldn't have a long life :))) - Have a lovely weekend, Tom :) - hugs
Date: 1/11/2025 11:29:00 AM
Love the picture you chose to go with your poem. Must exercise caution with these warning signs Anne-Lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2025 11:37:00 AM
- Yes, the truth must be unchangeable and trustworthy Las - Thanks for your comment :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 1/11/2025 11:17:00 AM
your bitesize poem sure packs a punch Anne-Lise - beware of the red flags especially when someone has their claws out! hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2025 1:04:00 PM
- really ... I don't care, Jan :))) - ( judged "blindly" ... but, I know where I have a chance :))) ... been here so long ... learning with the years ) - hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2025 12:38:00 PM
dont lose heart Anne-Lise - I never place with her now but i do try from time to time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2025 11:22:00 AM
- ("red flag") ... I have changed the title of this poem three times ... posted the last line as the title so that there were 6 lines for the contest (a contest that I will never be on the winner list ... but one should never give up :))) - Have a lovely weekend, Jan :) - hugs
Date: 1/11/2025 10:29:00 AM
We have to be so careful in life, red flags are everywhere. Hope you're having a lovely weekend Anne-Lise, stay warm. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2025 11:25:00 AM
- I don't like lies, no matter if the truth is hard to swallow, Tom :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 1/11/2025 10:23:00 AM
Great photo to accompany your poem.. Have to be careful of these red flags...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2025 11:26:00 AM
- Thanks for your comment, S.O. :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Date: 1/11/2025 9:04:00 AM
Great writing to go with the fierce picture!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/11/2025 11:26:00 AM
- Thank you :) - Have a lovely weekend, Andrea :) - hugs

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