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- Ice Cold Thoughts -

Frozen ice crystals
                                 The moon are meant to glisten
                                       Dressed from tip to toe 
                                The darkness and pain followed
                                  What a madness in this world








26.011.2018
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Susan Ashley Date: 12/13/2018 10:20:00 PM Your exquisite poem is expressed with artistry and beauty, Anne-Lise. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/14/2018 3:13:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

J.W. Earnings Date: 12/11/2018 5:23:00 AM I agree with Warren completely! You did a great job, writing this lovely poem Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/12/2018 12:36:00 PM - Thank you very much, J.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll Date: 11/29/2018 11:46:00 AM From the beauty of nature to world madness in 5 lines. So well written and unique, Anne-Lise. Sending a big warm hug your way~ Warren Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/6/2018 2:06:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/28/2018 2:40:00 PM ohh, love how this ended, anne... may life treat us well especially on a season that blows too cold... lovely...huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/6/2018 2:05:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/27/2018 6:05:00 PM Nice way to put words to that awesome picture, Anne Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/28/2018 1:12:00 PM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/27/2018 4:26:00 AM I came to read this again, maybe is a "northern" thing! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2018 4:30:00 AM - The world is cold ... both of ice and human feelings, Arthur :) - Always nice to see you :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/26/2018 8:23:00 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, this photois beautiful. Winter can be beautiful sometimes. Bare trees are dressed with snow or freezing rain ice. have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/28/2018 1:11:00 PM - Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/26/2018 6:18:00 PM madness sure gives it the frozen touch excellent pen dear friend i pray you have a blessed week anne lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/28/2018 1:11:00 PM - Thank you very much, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/26/2018 3:34:00 PM Never let the madness get you down, Sunshine. The joy you spread on Poetry Soup makes this a wonderful place to participate. This is a beautiful tanka, dear. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/28/2018 1:11:00 PM - Thank you very much, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 11/26/2018 9:58:00 AM Sun, beautifully penned, and your image is wonderful too ~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 2:06:00 PM - Thank you very much, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 11/26/2018 9:14:00 AM Wonderfully written my friend. In every joy a little pain is found. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 2:06:00 PM - Chris, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/26/2018 8:31:00 AM Well-done depiction of contrast, Anne-Lise! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 2:05:00 PM - Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 11/26/2018 7:34:00 AM Wow this is great Ann-Lise! Very well written :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 2:04:00 PM - Heidi, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/26/2018 6:53:00 AM Apt portrait of the photo in your words..wonderfully depicted Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 2:04:00 PM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2018 4:21:00 AM beautifully penned Anne-lise:-) Happy Monday:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 5:42:00 AM - I was out before 06:00 this morning .... dressed from tip to toe ... terribly cold - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/26/2018 3:38:00 AM So true Sunshine, beneath the beauty lurks the madness in our world. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 5:38:00 AM - Even behind the madness ... beauty exists - Small ice crystals that shine an early Monday morning, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/26/2018 3:36:00 AM I was lucky in this...crazy world to witness this phenomenon many times here and in Canada. First time though depicted in poetic form dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 5:35:00 AM - Demetrios thank you very much, it feels like the North Pole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 11/26/2018 3:33:00 AM crazy beautiful! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 5:33:00 AM - Thank you very much, Mahtab :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/26/2018 2:50:00 AM Madness yes, but such a beautiful photo! Loved the poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2018 5:32:00 AM - Thank you very much, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)