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Frozen ice crystals The moon are meant to glisten Dressed from tip to toe The darkness and pain followed What a madness in this world 26.011.2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Tanka 5-7-5-7-7 howmanysyllables.com

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/13/2018 10:20:00 PM

Your exquisite poem is expressed with artistry and beauty, Anne-Lise. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/14/2018 3:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/11/2018 5:23:00 AM

I agree with Warren completely! You did a great job, writing this lovely poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2018 12:36:00 PM

- Thank you very much, J.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 11/29/2018 11:46:00 AM

From the beauty of nature to world madness in 5 lines. So well written and unique, Anne-Lise. Sending a big warm hug your way~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2018 2:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/28/2018 2:40:00 PM

ohh, love how this ended, anne... may life treat us well especially on a season that blows too cold... lovely...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2018 2:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2018 6:05:00 PM

Nice way to put words to that awesome picture, Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2018 1:12:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/27/2018 4:26:00 AM

I came to read this again, maybe is a "northern" thing! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2018 4:30:00 AM

- The world is cold ... both of ice and human feelings, Arthur :) - Always nice to see you :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/26/2018 8:23:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, this photois beautiful. Winter can be beautiful sometimes. Bare trees are dressed with snow or freezing rain ice. have a nice evening my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/26/2018 6:18:00 PM

madness sure gives it the frozen touch excellent pen dear friend i pray you have a blessed week anne lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/26/2018 3:34:00 PM

Never let the madness get you down, Sunshine. The joy you spread on Poetry Soup makes this a wonderful place to participate. This is a beautiful tanka, dear. Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/26/2018 9:58:00 AM

Sun, beautifully penned, and your image is wonderful too ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 2:06:00 PM

- Thank you very much, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/26/2018 9:14:00 AM

Wonderfully written my friend. In every joy a little pain is found.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 2:06:00 PM

- Chris, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/26/2018 8:31:00 AM

Well-done depiction of contrast, Anne-Lise! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 2:05:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/26/2018 7:34:00 AM

Wow this is great Ann-Lise! Very well written :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 2:04:00 PM

- Heidi, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/26/2018 6:53:00 AM

Apt portrait of the photo in your words..wonderfully depicted Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 2:04:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2018 4:21:00 AM

beautifully penned Anne-lise:-) Happy Monday:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:42:00 AM

- I was out before 06:00 this morning .... dressed from tip to toe ... terribly cold - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/26/2018 3:38:00 AM

So true Sunshine, beneath the beauty lurks the madness in our world. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:38:00 AM

- Even behind the madness ... beauty exists - Small ice crystals that shine an early Monday morning, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/26/2018 3:36:00 AM

I was lucky in this...crazy world to witness this phenomenon many times here and in Canada. First time though depicted in poetic form dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:35:00 AM

- Demetrios thank you very much, it feels like the North Pole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/26/2018 3:33:00 AM

crazy beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:33:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Mahtab :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/26/2018 2:50:00 AM

Madness yes, but such a beautiful photo! Loved the poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:32:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)