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Funny Cards.  Hot flash!!

Do you remember old aunt Julie
In a hurry she opened all the windows
Even in the middle of the winter,
rain or storm
She suddenly needed to have fresh air
Breathed like a whale
The face changed color
Her cheek, ear and throat became deep red
Talked louder than normal
She was a comic figure

We were just young children
did not understand
The years go by ...
we are there ourselves
Hormonal hot flashes
I'm smiling by the old memories
Aunt Julie's advice was;
No estrogen supplements or pills ... but ... 
...... Ice cold champagne ......











   04.08.2017
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Date: 8/11/2017 12:04:00 PM
Ha ha the aunt had it right--I like her way of thinking. CUTE poem had me chuckling. Used to stand outside middle of winter with no jacket on. When your hot your hot. love phyl
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Date: 8/11/2017 12:08:00 PM
- To the boiling point :) - Many thanks for your visit and your comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/10/2017 4:37:00 PM
Okay! Love it!
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Date: 8/11/2017 3:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2017 3:39:00 PM
"Aunt Jane" sure inspired a lovely witty poem, Anne-LIse! Those extreme moments of cold & hot do send many women round the bend!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/11/2017 3:32:00 AM
- Your visit and your comments are highly appreciated Paul, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2017 6:34:00 AM
I dont drink though, so maybe for ladies like Aunt Julie, fans and open windows would have to suffice. A very funny take on the dreaded "Hot Flushes" !! Thanks for the laugh Anne-Lise...Maria xxx
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:12:00 AM
- I think water will do the same effect, Maria :))) - Thanks for the visit and for the comment :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/6/2017 8:19:00 PM
I LOVE this one, Ann-Lise What a great poem on this memory of your aunt. FAVE
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:27:00 AM
- Glad you enjoying my poem :- Ice Cold Champagne -, Andrea - Many thanks, especially for one fav. - I have no: "aunt Julie", ... but I'm sure she exists many places - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/6/2017 9:55:00 AM
Aunt Julie toasted them in style...Nicely penned Anne...
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Date: 8/6/2017 11:22:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and for the comment, Joseph :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/5/2017 4:25:00 AM
LOL! You have delighted me by your lovely write my friend! I surely enjoyed reading your fun poem here this morning! What a superior piece of penmanship Anne-Lise, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/6/2017 11:21:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and for the comment, Russell :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/5/2017 2:55:00 AM
What a wonderful advice aunt, Julie has given but could I have the champagne even if I do not belong to the same sex? Haha! Beautifully written my dear, Anne-Lise. Note: Her advice seems to be good but...expensiv. Don't you think? Haha. Hugs!
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Date: 8/6/2017 11:20:00 AM
- Of course, my friend :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/5/2017 12:51:00 AM
We all had an aunt Julie Anne-Lise...great depiction lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/6/2017 11:19:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/5/2017 12:33:00 AM
Lovely picture to go with your funny poem, Sunshine:) made me smile:)
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Date: 8/6/2017 5:52:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and for the comment, Jo :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 9:42:00 PM
Oh this is fun, Sunshine, reality check when we get older and those hot flashes decide to take over ... love the write ~*
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Date: 8/6/2017 5:51:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and for the comment, Eve :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 6:36:00 PM
Lol I can so relate. I like your Aunt's advice something I just might try. Thanks for the chuckle. :)
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Date: 8/6/2017 5:51:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and for the comment, Carol :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 5:35:00 PM
Great one Sunshine..lol :)
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Date: 8/6/2017 5:50:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and for the comment, Heidi :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 4:24:00 PM
Aunt Julie got it right. I enjoyed reading it...Have a nice day
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Date: 8/6/2017 5:50:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and for the comment, Arturo :) - Much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 3:22:00 PM
I'll drink to that! Well done!
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:33:00 PM
- CHEERS ! - Thank you for your visit and comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 3:16:00 PM
nice advice I'll let my wife know, she's going on 15 years of dealing with this, it disappears then comes back...
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:31:00 PM
- I do not think the doctor would recommend champagne, Frederic :))) - Poor wife ... 15 years, sounds terrible - Thank you for your visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 3:14:00 PM
ohh, middle age flashes... so well crafted; i like, anne...reminds me of my aunt too.. happy huggs
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:28:00 PM
- :))) ... I have no: "aunt Julie", Nette ... but I'm sure she exists :))) - happy huggggs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/4/2017 2:56:00 PM
i love this one, anne-lise, and the picture is just perfect!
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:25:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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