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  The strong wind hits me on my cold cheek 
  The bird's escape across the great ocean 
  My tears, my longing for summer that was 
  Over high mountains, through deep forests 
  Let your fingers glide easily over my mouth 
  Rhythm of the chest, the heart is beating, soul burns 
  Yearning expression - heat of the closeness 
  Compared to eternity where the storm has subsided 
  At dusk I hear the sounds of hours we shared 
  You are far away, yet close 
  The yearning for you is a flame 
  that will never burn down






  18.10.2014
  A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 6/16/2015 7:25:00 PM
Great and intelligent use of simple words I enjoyed reading and learning from your writings
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Date: 6/17/2015 3:33:00 AM
- Mofeed, pleased that you enjoy my poem :) - Thanks for your lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/21/2014 5:05:00 AM
- I know that - ( the soul burning, and yearning rememberance )... very well written
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Date: 12/21/2014 5:07:00 AM
- Rene,pleased that you enjoy my poem! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/28/2014 5:58:00 PM
I love the first line of this poem. It's a reality check that literally hits you in face and a great contrast to "Compared to eternity where the storm has subsided." Its mystically romantic while connecting mind, body, soul, memories and longing for love all into one near perfect poem. Well done Ann Lise. Peace, Terry
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Date: 11/29/2014 4:53:00 AM
- Terrell,pleased that you enjoy my poem! - Thanks for your lovely visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/10/2014 11:01:00 AM
Sensual and romantic, but let me ask: how do you combine these 2 images of remoteness and closeness"You are far away, yet close"?
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Date: 11/10/2014 11:55:00 AM
- Far away .... but in the mind close :) - Thanks for your nice visit and comments Jaafar - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2014 6:34:00 AM
Wow! Sensuous and romantic. Your words glow like banked embers.
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Date: 11/9/2014 6:38:00 AM
- Hi Monterey,pleased that you enjoy my poem! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2014 11:15:00 PM
Beautiful beyond beautiful . . . maybe somewhere over the rainbow.
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Date: 10/26/2014 4:00:00 AM
- Paul,pleased that you enjoy my poem! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2014 8:23:00 AM
Gorgeous lines !! "At dusk I hear the sounds of hours we shared.." I so relate to that !!! Beautiful !!!
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:06:00 AM
- Debra,pleased that you enjoy my poem! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/22/2014 12:11:00 PM
A beautiful poem Anne Lise and I love the last two lines. Beautiful. love phyl
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:14:00 PM
- Dear Phyllis,pleased that you enjoy my poem! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2014 10:28:00 PM
I extremely love this poem of yours my very dear friend Anne Lise. I am missing many things and many people right now, especially that i am having my short break from school. I am terribly missing my family, my old place of work, my best friend here who just left yesterday back to our country and many good friends here at soup including you. Thank you so much for sharing this very lovely poem! Many blessings to you. love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/21/2014 3:40:00 AM
- Pleased that you enjoy my poem, dear friend Leonora ! - But it was not my intention to make you sad - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2014 3:03:00 PM
A heart warming work of love and longing, it is a sad but romantic piece of beaty, enjoyed it alot my friend, Anne Lise, I'm totally glad I stopped by to read this today, cheri
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Date: 10/20/2014 3:08:00 PM
- Cherl my friend,pleased that you enjoy my poem! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2014 6:23:00 AM
I enjoyed- heat of the closeness.Beautiful.
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Date: 10/20/2014 11:10:00 AM
- Pleased that you enjoy my poem, Muhammad ! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2014 2:31:00 AM
Excellent. Very touching write my friend. Well penned. Tfs
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Date: 10/20/2014 11:12:00 AM
- Ravi, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 7:27:00 PM
this is beautiful and filled with yearning. Great title for it!
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Date: 10/20/2014 11:11:00 AM
- Pleased that you enjoy my poem, Andrea ! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 2:33:00 PM
Great love Anne...My eyes with tears...heartfelt pains...7 out of 7...Best wishes from my Indian heart...One day we will create new history with our true love...
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Date: 10/19/2014 2:37:00 PM
... Yes... one day :))) - Sandip, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 2:17:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, each time we lose someone we love, we are inspired to write poems like this sad one. Indeed, the "yearning" flame never completely burns down, but we learn to live with loss as it's part of life. A very touching poem, dear. Love, carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2014 2:21:00 PM
- Time does not heal all wounds, but the pain subsides Carolyn - Thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 1:49:00 PM
Hello oxox, I liked the fifth line, sweetly unexpected, your use of the word "mouth". Very evocative to this reader.
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:55:00 PM
- Hi Dan, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - "I Miss You" - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 1:02:00 PM
The fire burns with the fuel of love...beautiful write Anne
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:13:00 PM
- Pleased that you enjoy my poem, Joseph ! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 1:00:00 PM
Inspirational and captivating Anne .Last line is exceptional. Anne
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:12:00 PM
- Anne, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 12:44:00 PM
The flame of love is never extinguished when in our mind the beloved lingers! Extraordinarily beautiful, dear friend, Anne Lise!
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:11:00 PM
- Pleased that you enjoy my poem, dear Demertios ! - Thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 12:03:00 PM
Joyfull and sad enrobed in the music of poetry. Touching and captavating, I loved it.
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:12:00 PM
- Maurice, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 11:09:00 AM
Oh! lovely lovely one poem. Excellent work you have done here. Your pen talks sweet. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/19/2014 11:10:00 AM
- Bl, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 9:32:00 AM
oh my anne, I am taken by this lyrical, splendid work; it is so gentle and filled with poetic appeal!... you wow me.. huggggs and best of sunday!
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Date: 10/19/2014 11:09:00 AM
- Nette, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 6:02:00 AM
Beautiful! Your words sing.
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Date: 10/19/2014 6:04:00 AM
- Richard, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 5:18:00 AM
This is sad but lovely in thought and beautiful in expression. I have been touched! Well done Anne Lise. /x/ paul
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Date: 10/19/2014 5:28:00 AM
- Paul, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem - I Miss You - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 5:01:00 AM
Oh that's extremely honourable for me what u just said! Your poems r so sweet n brilliant, they can't ever die my friend,, they r just immortal! I luv ur pen my dear!
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Date: 10/19/2014 5:15:00 AM
- A "poet" without readers will "die" - as a "flower" with "sun and water" - without comments on my poems .... then I would stop posting more - It would be sad :( - Therefore, I'm really happy for all the lovely comments I get :)))) - Highly appreciate everyone !!!! - Lovely Sunday Dr. Upma my dear friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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