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There will come a time where the weapons must be put down Death and wounds have created scar for eternity No future, no happiness ..... crying Heaven is missing sun, moon and stars Grey and dusty landscape ..... ruins Trembling with fear and pain Blood and dead bodies Wild horses have stopped running ..... nowhere to run I have a dream ..... let the earth be free * * The title is in memory of : Martin Luther King (1929 - 1968 ) * The poem is for the victims in Syria 30.08.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 12/18/2014 2:03:00 PM
May your beautiful dream come true.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/18/2014 2:06:00 PM
- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, M.L. ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/21/2014 3:33:00 AM
again beautiful!
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Date: 1/21/2014 4:35:00 AM
:) Thank you, Fayaz ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2014 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2014 11:42:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Fayaz ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2013 3:48:00 AM
Anne, I am touched by your tribute to a great and prophetic leader. You chose just the right words and used your talent perfectly.... I believe I should be visiting you more often.... There are many great posts in your portfolio.... Love ya dearly.... Jake
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2013 3:53:00 AM
- You are most welcome, John. - Always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/8/2013 7:01:00 PM
some men are born to murder, and like the feel of it , great poetry babe...xox
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2013 3:44:00 AM
- Blood taste in mouth ??? - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Don ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/30/2013 8:18:00 AM
i love this Anne
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2013 11:27:00 AM
- Thank you....love U ! :) // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/30/2013 8:05:00 AM
Quite interesting Anne
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2013 11:26:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Omebe ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 7:37:00 AM
Great Tribute! Well done Anne Lise
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Date: 9/25/2013 11:04:00 AM
- Richard, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/20/2013 12:28:00 PM
True word, without peace there is absolutely nothing to fight for
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Date: 9/20/2013 12:30:00 PM
- Dash, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/15/2013 1:05:00 AM
and such true words let the earth be free forever ,we all have these hope xxxx duncan
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2013 3:20:00 AM
- Duncan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/11/2013 10:21:00 AM
let the earth be free...a wonderful hope Anne Lise and thank you for your comments on The Looney written as a joke for a friend, Robert (RabCD)
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Date: 9/11/2013 10:42:00 AM
- Robert, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2013 3:36:00 PM
SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL FROM WITHIN
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Date: 9/10/2013 2:00:00 AM
- Liam, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2013 3:04:00 AM
nice poem,,,, ech line is pened sweet.... a love the closing////.... may the dream come to pass
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Date: 9/9/2013 3:41:00 AM
- Patrick, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2013 3:04:00 AM
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Date: 9/8/2013 5:38:00 PM
this is the dream of most of humanity , but we know that it will never be the children are the ones who will see this destruction all around and not be able to cry out loud. STOP THIS DESTRUCTION CAN'T YOU SEE JUST HOW MUCH IT'S HURTING ME !
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2013 11:36:00 PM
- Louis, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2013 12:25:00 AM
Good poem on the victims of war...........let the earth be free--nice one.Luv*****child***
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Date: 9/8/2013 5:43:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and your comments, Litan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2013 10:39:00 AM
Beautifully penned. Cuts to the core. God bless MLK and the dream. Thanks Anne Lise! ~Kilmer
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Date: 9/7/2013 10:57:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and your comments, Stephen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2013 7:14:00 AM
May I thank you for directing me here. I do find it incredible that we can't live in peace. There are unfortunately some people who think its OK to own/control everything. They are little bullies with guns who have never grown up. Anyway, thank-you for your comment and let me say it is a pleasure to read your work. The laws of nature are the great equalizer as you point out in your own way.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2013 7:29:00 AM
- So true, Duke ! - My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2013 5:26:00 PM
I share that dream with you, Anne-Lise. Let's hope it becomes a reality!...A very beautiful message in this poem. Nicely done!...Thanks for commenting kindly on my poem!
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Date: 9/7/2013 2:49:00 AM
- My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2013 5:39:00 PM
yeah it is sad what war does - well written - and I totally agree
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:46:00 AM
- My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments Caroline. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2013 3:43:00 PM
AWSOME... BEAUTIFUL... LOVED IT!!! Never have I been inspired by anothers creation. ???????????????? :-) ??????????????? Never before reading this...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 4:11:00 PM
- My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments Ryan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2013 3:37:00 PM
I search for words, Within my speechless world. I search for color, Within a greyscale girl. The essence is of heaven, But the apprentice of hell. Our future lies victim, An' our children be as well. But in half of just a moment, Taken by the choice of virtue and of sin. I could teach you the secret, How all present and future battles you can win. Because the future isn't written, And in just a Mississippi it all begins. So sieze it for the changing, And change it for the kids. :-) 1.4.U
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 4:13:00 PM
:)
Date: 9/4/2013 4:36:00 PM
such sadness in the world we live, brother does not, brother forgive, and death is ever near??? great poem babe
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 2:03:00 AM
- My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments Dan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:03:00 AM
- Sorry........DON !
Date: 9/4/2013 1:04:00 PM
Such a beautiful dream and may it become a reality
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 2:05:00 PM
- My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments Vandana. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/4/2013 11:00:00 AM
What a beautiful dream and a nice tribute. So sad the world is so full of violence. I do not listen to the news anymore so the heart will not ache. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 11:13:00 AM
- Yes, it is heartbreaking to watch ..... - My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/3/2013 4:37:00 PM
What a dream. I hope I'm alive when that dream comes true
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 2:04:00 AM
- My thoughts to the innocent victims of war - thanks for your visit and your comments Christy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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