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You're totally subject to the whims of nature... If You Weren't Already Afraid Of The Open Sea, These 23 Pics Will Do The Trick

- Hydra and Kharybdis -

When the waves break and

                                     the sky is being torn up

                               The foam splashed through the air

                            In the cracks of the rawness of reality

                          You respect it and think you understand it

                            forces that surpass every single master

                      The light from the lantern hit the neck of the rock

                        Tried to breathe with saline water in the lungs

                   Soaking in the chest sounds like a old coffee machine

                             The scream of pain, which crushes stone

                                    in the heavy moment of death

                                     Let Hydra and Kharybdis rest

                                        and clutching at straws
 
                                      Because the knife felt cold

                                       against the skinny throat






* Hydra ("The Monster of Lerna"), a giant sea monster with nine heads 
   in Greek mythology

* Kharybdis, a sea monster in Greek mythology
   that creates a life-threatening maelstrom



   15.09.2020
   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
   Copyright © All Rights Reserved

   Clutching at Straws Poetry Contest
   Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
   5th place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 3/5/2021 6:58:00 AM
Definitely a fave for me, Sunshine! The sea and its danger! Respect it? Absolutely! God bless you, dear one!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2021 7:30:00 AM
- The sea fascinates me ... but we must always have respect for the power of the sea ... many thanks for your fave and comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/6/2020 3:17:00 PM
Congrats Anne-Lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2020 2:17:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/6/2020 6:08:00 AM
Beautiful Anne-Lise! Congratulations! Linda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2020 2:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/6/2020 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your Great Win in this contest!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2020 2:15:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/6/2020 5:12:00 AM
Congrats, dear lady. Lovely write :) God bless you and keep you. Happy writing and keep up the wonderful words
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2020 2:15:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/22/2020 12:32:00 PM
such vivid imagery, i am not a good sailor in the stormy seas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2020 1:01:00 PM
- Not me either, Jan :) - Thank you very much for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2020 4:50:00 PM
Nothing scarier than a storm at sea. Never been on a boat when the weather was was and never intend to be on one. I figure if God wanted me to be in the ocean I'd have gills. Good job here and the pic is awesome. God Bless, JB
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2020 1:53:00 AM
- Judy, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2020 12:47:00 PM
Wow! Next installment please! So much like a spiritual representation of the physical battles the world must deal with daily. Very exciting!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2020 1:53:00 AM
- Many thanks Joe, for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/17/2020 5:48:00 AM
This piece dramatically represents a tempestuous scene!! I can hear panic-stricken voices amidst. A great one for the contest, Anne-Lise!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2020 1:52:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2020 7:54:00 PM
Whoa! This is an epic entry for the contest, Anne-Lise. It seems you have quite a yen for tales of the sea. G.L! :) gw
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2020 2:20:00 AM
- I have great respect for the forces of the sea, Gershon - the sea is right outside my window ... - Thank you very much for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2020 6:48:00 PM
Wow! This is impressive, Anne-Lise! Fave!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2020 2:12:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your Wow comments and your valuable fave, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2020 2:11:00 PM
goodness, action-packed with tremendous imagery, anne...stay safe!...huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2020 2:15:00 AM
- Thank you very much Nette, for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2020 12:47:00 PM
Such a terrific write with splendid imagery dear Anne mam..loved the last 2 lines.It's spine-chilling..!! I believe your doing well. Best wishes for the contest.Take care.Much love:-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2020 2:14:00 AM
- Deepa, thank you very much for your lovely comments and good wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2020 11:31:00 AM
wow, i really love this exciting piece
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2020 12:15:00 PM
- A pleasure to share with you, Jack ... thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2020 1:37:00 AM
I learned from mythology that one often has to choose the lesser of two evils. Lovely poem. ~~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2020 5:01:00 AM
- On the open sea, no one knows what one will experience ... I do not think we have a choice, Victor - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/15/2020 2:24:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, Fantastically and wondrously articulated!! Mythology wins the day!! Most Excellent Work!! I wish you the best of luck in the poetry contest too!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 9/16/2020 11:53:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, You know that I always enjoy/love your poetry very much!! The second book will be coming in the future. I think that you and Liam will like the final published book. Keep writing and doing all of the magnificent things that you do. Best Greetings too from Ingrid!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2020 4:57:00 AM
- Hi Gary, thank you very much for your support and lovely comments ... nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/15/2020 1:45:00 PM
I love it! Great job on this poem!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2020 4:56:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your support and lovely comments, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/15/2020 11:56:00 AM
Nice action and imagery...to the wild wild Sea..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2020 12:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Atruro :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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