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- Heavenly Hugs -

Unique is the discipline of love 
Understanding God's law
Faith holds supreme commander

Sometimes we have to fight 
our way through a concrete jungle
stone cold dreams nightmare evaluates 

Rocking the cradle unworthy desires 
no peace or rest for the wicked deeds
in order to find the answers to hopes prayer
 
Truth pointing us directions 
within our code of moral conduct 
which supports us in our voyage
 
In the walk of life chaos grips hearts consumed with hate 
Without faith our souls identity will become dust 
Needing hugs from heaven to survive 







A Collaborated Poem 19.11.2015
Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
(tercets unrymed)

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Jonna Gallano Date: 1/20/2016 1:24:00 AM This so great Anne! :) -Jonna Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2016 3:05:00 AM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Jonna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Johnson Date: 12/9/2015 2:37:00 PM Thank you Anne. Indeed, without Heavenly Hug, we are hopelessly lost. Good work. Blessings. MC!. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/9/2015 2:41:00 PM - A pleasure to share with you, Curtis - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels Date: 12/4/2015 1:33:00 PM This is a lovely collaboration Anne Lise! Absolutely love it ;) have a good weekend! Hugs W Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/4/2015 1:57:00 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - I wish you a peaceful and great weekend, Wilma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 11/29/2015 7:02:00 AM Faith is the answer Anne... you are right. A poem full of content that we would all do well to ponder. Well done! Keith Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/29/2015 7:20:00 AM - "Sometimes we have to fight our way through a concrete jungle", Keith - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quincy Mac Date: 11/22/2015 7:20:00 PM Nice piece of writing Anne, might have to read more of yours :) Aroha, Quincy Mac Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/23/2015 5:55:00 AM - You are welcome :) - Thank you for this lovely comments Quincy Mac - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 11/22/2015 1:11:00 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Another great collaboration again from you and Liam. The last verse, "Needing hugs from heaven to survive," is a marvelous end point for this write -- and says it all!! "TR + FAV"!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2015 1:28:00 PM - I knew you'd like this, dear Gary - Yes, we need "hugs" from heaven in 2015 - Thank you for beautiful words - especially glad that it was given room in your "golden fav. book" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Barchettadrive Date: 11/22/2015 1:33:00 AM You two are unstoppable! Great write Liam McDaid & Anne Lise Andresen Another awesome collaboration about the ultimate HUG which we all could use every day! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2015 7:20:00 AM - Red, many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne Date: 11/21/2015 3:54:00 PM you work very well together Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/22/2015 7:19:00 AM - Thanks, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/21/2015 2:54:00 PM Heavenly collaboration, heavenly poetic results! A seven to each, Anne-Lise and Liam! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2015 3:06:00 PM - Many thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/21/2015 10:27:00 AM have a heavenly saturday, anne..huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2015 3:05:00 PM - You 2 :)

Rainbow Promise Date: 11/20/2015 3:43:00 PM Great collaboration Anne Lise and Liam! Let 'Truth continue to point direction along your voyage.' RP. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/21/2015 3:04:00 PM - R.P., many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 11/20/2015 10:26:00 AM A heart touching poem with beautiful message. Nice collaboration so for beautiful pen 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 12:11:00 PM - Bl, many thanks for nice visit a 7 and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet Date: 11/20/2015 10:12:00 AM A touching and eloquent description of the human experience. Great work! Emile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 12:11:00 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Emile :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie Date: 11/20/2015 9:35:00 AM mankind has so many flaws....and unless we put sin on pause....doing our best to Obey His Laws....which is, of course, the Ultimate Cause....;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 12:10:00 PM - Eric, many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/20/2015 8:58:00 AM the two of you can really make images combust, anne... this is enticing.. huggs this happy day! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 12:10:00 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Nette :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/20/2015 3:52:00 AM So true Anne Lise so true.. such a lovely poem u hv come up with dear!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 5:45:00 AM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Dr. Upma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade Date: 11/19/2015 6:58:00 PM Faith, love, hope -- now that is a group hug!! A powerful message . . . may we always find this hug in our deepest darkest nights. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 5:44:00 AM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/19/2015 5:56:00 PM Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam!A very beautiful, heavenly,captivating sweet love poem you've penned here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Excellent piece!So very beautifully written.I enjoy it.Just outstanding!A very heavenly sweet most beautiful love piece to be held very close to my heart.I love it!Just awesome!Wonderful imagery!Just great! Fantastic collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 5:43:00 AM - Many thanks for nice visit a 7 and great comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/19/2015 5:33:00 PM truly golden you pen sang a very beautiful tune anne lise a pleasure writing this with you dear pal wishing you a blessed weekend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 5:43:00 AM - Thank you for a beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)