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10.02.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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I can move mountains Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

2st place in the contest

                               
                                   You will find me fearless
                             I am master of my own strength
                            Shout out the word ; c o u r a g e
                            Always hardworking, not strenuous
                                        a beacon of hope
                                 Fearless heart, attitude bold
                                    The vision of exploring 
                                  daring to move mountains
                                                          I
                                                          promise 
                                                                    you


                                    Violent storms may attack
                                 and untested strength may fail
                                    Put the lessons on your soul
                                           ignore the brake
                              Certain things capture my attention
                                       The steadfast Edelweiss
                                           drenched in dew
                                         Breath of almighty
                                                          I
                                                          promise 
                                                                   you

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Triny Xiang

Date: 3/25/2024 11:40:00 AM

You are courageous, indeed, by your lexicon. Continue to be the edelweiss growing deep in your soul and let it blossom. I'll be on the edge of my seat watching your next unfurling.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2025 6:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Triny :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/11/2024 8:20:00 PM

A beautiful strong poem Anne-Lise Anyone with the faith to move mountains is to be believed. Your poem is like an affirmation to stir the heart and encourage ones heart to become fearless. The vision of the Edelweiss standing tall and strong is perfect. A fave for me. Truly lovely.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2025 6:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, S.V. :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/11/2024 9:26:00 AM

each one of us is the Queen or King of our own kingdom, we are the ones who choose to be defeated or not, your poem reflects this truth...good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2025 6:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Frederic :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/11/2024 5:51:00 AM

Powerful words of inspiration, Anne-Lise. A poem that aspires to reach beyond mountains!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2025 6:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/10/2024 10:44:00 PM

Wow, this is an inspiring and uplifting poem, dear Anne-Lise.. You've impeccably woven a tapestry of strength and resilience in your artistic words..I especially love how you've written "You will find me fearless I am master of my own strength", "a beacon of hope", "drenched in dew Breath of almighty I promise you" Gosh, such amazing descriptions throughout. Sending many best wishes and light your way, keep shining and writing always! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2025 6:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Hiya :) - hugs