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They looked forward to spend the weekend in this haunted aged castle Who believes in haunted stories? It was evening when they arrived the table was set for twelve guests even if there were only four of them The food was served in silence by the host They just wanted to enjoy the meal and jump to bed early Suddenly the one empty chair moves pushed half a meter backwards with one scraper sound The sound reaches right into the spinal cord Everyone agreed it was scary But who believes in haunted stories? They understood that it was several guests at the table than invited Perhaps residents from earlier eras After the meal they sat in silence and listened Low muttering and the sound of knife against porcelain and glasses that clinked Where reality is no longer sufficient and the imagination is given free rein Neither the dog nor the guest found peace at night whose slumbers their eyelids were wide open The experience of what was real and true that night no one can confirm They tried to ignore it at first but could feel someone breathing down their necks Doors that were locked from the inside were opened by invisible hands The floor creaked and there was a cold grave breath in the room The weekend was cut short after this one night Hey, who believes in haunted stories? Their memories are now tattooed and haunted Incomprehensible to people who have never experienced this 26.02.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - H - Words - Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Date: 3/12/2023 6:25:00 AM
A scary story Anne-Lise. Well written and compelling. Congrats on the win . Well deserved.
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Date: 3/2/2023 5:01:00 AM
lol thank God I never entered that castle of yours, I'd be running scared too. Congrats on your win, amazing story dear heart :)
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:06:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Vie Rose :) - hugs
Date: 3/2/2023 12:47:00 AM
Sunshine, excellent writing for this haunted poem, and what a great image, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:05:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Constance :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2023 7:31:00 PM
Ooh, I love spooky scary stories. And this one fits the bill :) Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your winning placement! Hugs // Charlie
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:05:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2023 3:39:00 PM
An haunting write Anne-Lise, so good I doubt I’ll be able to sleep tonight especially as I’m on my own, husband in hospital again unfortunately. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:05:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Belle :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2023 1:15:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win with your "Haunted" write/picture. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:05:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2023 11:50:00 AM
congratulation my poetic friend I really enjoyed your haunting poem, sad though it ended too soon I wanted it to continue
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Frederic :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2023 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on the top-winning achievement; your poem is so lovely, and I like the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
Date: 2/28/2023 2:31:00 AM
Haunting poem, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2023 1:28:00 PM
Your "Haunted" is a wonderful story/write/picture. Good Luck with this one. I may not sleep tonight. Lights On, Please!!! Hugs. Have a blessed/fun day writing away....................
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2023 8:34:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. There is always something scary about an old abandoned house of any size. Thanks for sharing and for dropping my page. Sara
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:46:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2023 8:32:00 AM
Spooky! Very exciting writing, dearest Anne-Lise. I was taken in by the story. Thank you for the experience. Hugs.
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:46:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Demetrios :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2023 3:16:00 AM
Very scary.... ! Though frightening, there is a thrill in reading ghost stories. I love them. Doors locked from inside getting opened.... whoooo..... ! Just imagine the fright of those inside. Great entry Smile....
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:46:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Valsa :) - hugs
Date: 2/27/2023 2:30:00 AM
Lovely ghost stories. makes one scary. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:45:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 2/26/2023 5:59:00 PM
You gave us such a fright, I won't be checking in Sunshine, no matter how much you beg me, lol , gl in the contest this is well written , love it
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:45:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs
Date: 2/26/2023 2:07:00 PM
Spooky, creepy depiction, Anne-Lise--fit for the contest theme you chose. Ghostly sights and sounds resonate from the haunted castle. Well done, indeed!
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:45:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 2/26/2023 12:39:00 PM
Interesting write, Anne-Lise! The ghosts intertwined with the guests.
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Date: 2/27/2023 8:45:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and your comment, Kim :) - hugs

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