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15.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Six Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France
1st place in the contest

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- Harmony In Diversity -

                      ~ The creation is as white marble for our soul -
                           holy and without blemish ~ quote by poet

                               Her lips hum an aged love song
                                   a virgin glowing intensely
                              Golden arches of lily of the valley
                               drinking from the river of silver
                   Whose strings are touched by the heart's secret
                            - what divinity with a visionary magic
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:30:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 3/20/2025 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise! Quite a beauty.
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Date: 3/20/2025 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this enchanting gem
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Date: 3/20/2025 6:42:00 AM
Oh! congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/20/2025 3:26:00 AM
Back to your lovely poem with Congratulations on your first place win, dear Anne. Love and hugs!
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Date: 3/19/2025 3:28:00 PM
I nearly missed this, beautiful imagery Anne Lise and congrats on your placement. Tom
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Date: 3/19/2025 3:24:00 PM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sweet write and quote. Great lily of the valley flower picture. Hugs... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................
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Date: 3/16/2025 1:55:00 PM
Anne-Lise, a beautiful and enchanting poem. best of luck in the contest. -hugs
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Date: 3/16/2025 10:34:00 AM
beautiflu poem and the picture.
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Date: 3/16/2025 10:14:00 AM
This poem is pure magic. Mine is horrible. I'm considering deleting it. Hugs.
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Date: 3/16/2025 6:13:00 AM
Lilies of the valley are so enchanting. Indeed a divine sigh! Beautifully composed six lines with a stunning image. All the best dear Anne. Love and hugs
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Date: 3/16/2025 5:14:00 AM
Beautiful poetry! Outrageously good! A FAV!
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Date: 3/16/2025 12:13:00 AM
Yes variety is throughout the heavens Anne-Lise And yet.?? I am weighing the ecamples.?? In One I often consider, we have different elements That work to create day night rain and dry.' And Yet in becoming spirits we leave different race Traits behind..Yet here has worked in nation states since forever? Then there are angels who Will not assimilate.' Although they did before Wow theres a lot to condider? I am going to 'Branch out here" by stating a tree iis a tree..' And I am me.' Lol)))) Hm??
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Date: 3/16/2025 12:14:00 AM
Enjoyed the thoughts here You engender? Is that the right term?? All the best in The contest.!
Date: 3/15/2025 9:53:00 PM
Purity of love and divinity and essence of creation is pure and untainted. Very nice
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Date: 3/15/2025 6:51:00 PM
Anne-Lise, as you do so well, another beautiful sample of nature's gifts to us who appreciate them. Really a pleasure to read and contemplate.
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Date: 3/15/2025 4:18:00 PM
Beautiful imagery that touched me in all my creative places. I know Constance will adore this, too. CayCay
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Date: 3/15/2025 9:54:00 AM
gorgeous imagery and the picture is perfect with the poem! hugs jan xx
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