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16.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Halfway Through October: Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

2 place in the contest

orange sherbet sun prepare your jack-o'-lantern - a toothless monster

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 3:26:00 AM

Back with heartfelt wishes, congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:11:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Ink :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2023 10:14:00 AM

that sure is cute. Congrats in my contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:11:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/24/2023 8:41:00 AM

Teehee Anne-Lise my friend. This one is so cute! Love it! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:11:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Linda :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/18/2023 11:11:00 AM

Love it, Anne-Lise! Your haikus are always a fresh creation from your creativity! I always enjoy reading them and savoring your poetic spirit! Blessings and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Sam :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/17/2023 7:07:00 AM

Oh my, this gives me Halloween vibes so impeccably, I love your ' orange sherbet sun" especially, that's so unique and profound, dear Anne-Lise! I absolutely enjoyed reading this, a captivating senryu indeed!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Hiya :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/17/2023 5:36:00 AM

Brilliant one, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jo :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/16/2023 2:31:00 PM

Love it! Love Halloween -- some of my best friends have eyes just like those...with stubble left of teeth.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2023 1:39:00 PM

lol this one is fun Anne-Lise, I especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jan :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/16/2023 12:07:00 PM

oooh this one is clever.. nice arrangement of words..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, S.O.:) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 10/16/2023 10:57:00 AM

Nice Senyru. GL in contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/16/2023 10:45:00 AM

A creative/fun~write/picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away......................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 3:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Paula :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/16/2023 8:46:00 AM

what a delightful Senyru! The illustration is great...best wishes for the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2023 10:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment and good wishes, Sara :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/16/2023 8:11:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your entry for the contest theme is truly remarkable. The way you have eloquently expressed your thoughts and ideas is nothing short of awe-inspiring. Great picture too. BOL with the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2023 10:02:00 AM

- I have hardly seen a pumpkin, Las ... not so common in Norway ... but, it would be fun to make a "jack-o'-lantern" :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2023 7:41:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, You have penned a good entry for the contest theme. Nice photo too. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2023 9:57:00 AM

- Never good to know what the sponsor of the contest wants ... but, like to participate :) - Have a wonderful day to you too, Alexis :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 10/16/2023 5:51:00 AM

“Orange sherbet sun” wow i love that so creative and so well written! One of the most prettiest halloween poems iv read. Love this

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2023 9:53:00 AM

- Glad you liked my suggestion for this contest, Ink ...it just popped out of thin air :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 10/16/2023 5:40:00 AM

My monster is at my hospital as I have a few tests to do. A lovely "scary" haiku. Loved it. Hugs and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2023 9:50:00 AM

- Creepy monster at the hospital ... be careful, Victor :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs