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- Halfway Through October -

                                           orange sherbet sun
                                      prepare your jack-o'-lantern -
                                            a toothless monster

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2023

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Ink Empress Date: 10/29/2023 3:26:00 AM Back with heartfelt wishes, congratulations Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:11:00 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Ink :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/28/2023 10:14:00 AM that sure is cute. Congrats in my contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:11:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/24/2023 8:41:00 AM Teehee Anne-Lise my friend. This one is so cute! Love it! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:11:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Linda :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/18/2023 11:11:00 AM Love it, Anne-Lise! Your haikus are always a fresh creation from your creativity! I always enjoy reading them and savoring your poetic spirit! Blessings and hugs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:10:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Sam :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/17/2023 7:07:00 AM Oh my, this gives me Halloween vibes so impeccably, I love your ' orange sherbet sun" especially, that's so unique and profound, dear Anne-Lise! I absolutely enjoyed reading this, a captivating senryu indeed!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:10:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Hiya :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/17/2023 5:36:00 AM Brilliant one, Anne-lise:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:10:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jo :) - hugs

Joe Dimino Date: 10/16/2023 2:31:00 PM Love it! Love Halloween -- some of my best friends have eyes just like those...with stubble left of teeth. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Jan Allison Date: 10/16/2023 1:39:00 PM lol this one is fun Anne-Lise, I especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jan :) - hugs

Silent One Date: 10/16/2023 12:07:00 PM oooh this one is clever.. nice arrangement of words.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, S.O.:) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 10/16/2023 10:57:00 AM Nice Senyru. GL in contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:09:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/16/2023 10:45:00 AM A creative/fun~write/picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away...................... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2023 3:08:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Paula :) - hugs

Sotto Poet Date: 10/16/2023 8:11:00 AM Anne-Lise, your entry for the contest theme is truly remarkable. The way you have eloquently expressed your thoughts and ideas is nothing short of awe-inspiring. Great picture too. BOL with the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2023 10:02:00 AM - I have hardly seen a pumpkin, Las ... not so common in Norway ... but, it would be fun to make a "jack-o'-lantern" :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Alexis Y. Date: 10/16/2023 7:41:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, You have penned a good entry for the contest theme. Nice photo too. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2023 9:57:00 AM - Never good to know what the sponsor of the contest wants ... but, like to participate :) - Have a wonderful day to you too, Alexis :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Ink Empress Date: 10/16/2023 5:51:00 AM “Orange sherbet sun” wow i love that so creative and so well written! One of the most prettiest halloween poems iv read. Love this Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2023 9:53:00 AM - Glad you liked my suggestion for this contest, Ink ...it just popped out of thin air :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/16/2023 5:40:00 AM My monster is at my hospital as I have a few tests to do. A lovely "scary" haiku. Loved it. Hugs and blessings. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2023 9:50:00 AM - Creepy monster at the hospital ... be careful, Victor :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs