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Angel Rose

A stripped cold feeling The human empty shells shown One dark angel weeps http://www.howmanysyllables.com ( 5-7-5 ) 11.04.2016 A-L Andresen :)

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/9/2016 4:55:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent Haiku comes from your pen. I always know i am in for an excellent read when i stop by your Haiku Anne-Lise. Dark, deep and expressive write, the words encompass your vision so well. This is definitely a seven and into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX

Sunshine Smile
Date: 6/10/2016 1:59:00 PM

- Thank you for support, visits a 7 + fav. and lovely comments Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 5/12/2016 11:25:00 AM

Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 5/12/2016 11:43:00 AM

- Funom, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Femi Adebayo

Date: 4/22/2016 5:35:00 PM

Good!

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/23/2016 2:53:00 PM

- Thanks, Opeyemi :) - hugs // Sun :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/15/2016 7:08:00 AM

Full of humanity! Wonderfully done, dear Anne-Lise!

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/17/2016 1:32:00 PM

- Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/14/2016 10:04:00 PM

Deep and moving words.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/15/2016 5:22:00 AM

- Lenny, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/14/2016 7:47:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful write filled with heartfelt emotional haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it,

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/14/2016 8:19:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

BL DEVNATH

Date: 4/13/2016 6:41:00 PM

Sorry, missed to put 7. Now done.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/14/2016 7:11:00 AM

- Thanks :)

BL DEVNATH

Date: 4/13/2016 6:39:00 PM

Beautiful poem filled with heartfelt emotion tear drifting from empty shells. 7+ sure. Loved always my lovely lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/14/2016 7:11:00 AM

- Thanks for the lovely a 7 visit and comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

liam mcdaid

Date: 4/13/2016 3:30:00 PM

Feelings drip from the emotions in this excellent pen Anne lise wishing you a blessing of warm light

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/14/2016 7:10:00 AM

- Liam, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/12/2016 3:30:00 PM

A haunting write Anne...nicely penned

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/13/2016 8:45:00 AM

- Joseph, thank you for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

nette onclaud

Date: 4/12/2016 2:46:00 PM

sometimes, it's also nice to read you with a sad mood and tone.. so beautiful, anne.. happy day and huggs!

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 2:59:00 PM

- Thank you for visits and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 4/12/2016 1:07:00 PM

I've been learning from your Haikus and I've learned from this one also! A Haiku write of dark light! The feeling of "Without Feelings!"

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 1:12:00 PM

- It makes me happy, Walter :) - Thank you for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/11/2016 6:46:00 PM

Hugs, we both have a touch of this melancholy today.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 7:44:00 AM

- ......not every day "the sun" shining, Casarah - Thank you for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/11/2016 5:54:00 PM

This too shall pass, Anne-Lise. Lovely haiku. Peace pretty lady:)

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 7:42:00 AM

- .......... new day...... new opportunities :) - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/11/2016 5:36:00 PM

beautiful my poetic friend

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 7:38:00 AM

- Thank you for visits and lovely comments, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JAN ALLISON

Date: 4/11/2016 4:09:00 PM

beautiful but sad Anne Lise:-) hugs Hugs Jan xx

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 7:37:00 AM

- One human .... young and beautiful - full of lies makes me sad, Jan - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/11/2016 3:51:00 PM

Hi Anne, Amazing haiku......with love.

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 7:07:00 AM

- Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/11/2016 3:22:00 PM

when the shell is empty...there is little that can be redeemed. Sunshine, keep your chin up. Hugs

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/12/2016 7:06:00 AM

- ........or stupid as an empty bottle, dear Eileen :) - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 4/11/2016 2:41:00 PM

A very moving haiku A-L...splendid

Sunshine Smile
Date: 4/11/2016 2:58:00 PM

- One human .... young and beautiful - full of lies makes me sad, Tim - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)