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Angel Rose



A stripped cold feeling
The human empty shells shown
One dark angel weeps










http://www.howmanysyllables.com ( 5-7-5 )
11.04.2016
A-L Andresen :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/9/2016 4:55:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent Haiku comes from your pen. I always know i am in for an excellent read when i stop by your Haiku Anne-Lise. Dark, deep and expressive write, the words encompass your vision so well. This is definitely a seven and into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 6/10/2016 1:59:00 PM
- Thank you for support, visits a 7 + fav. and lovely comments Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2016 11:25:00 AM
Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:43:00 AM
- Funom, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/22/2016 5:35:00 PM
Good!
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Date: 4/23/2016 2:53:00 PM
- Thanks, Opeyemi :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/15/2016 7:08:00 AM
Full of humanity! Wonderfully done, dear Anne-Lise!
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Date: 4/17/2016 1:32:00 PM
- Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2016 10:04:00 PM
Deep and moving words.
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:22:00 AM
- Lenny, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2016 7:47:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write filled with heartfelt emotional haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it,
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Date: 4/14/2016 8:19:00 AM
- Ravi, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2016 12:03:00 AM
A beautiful, emotional and moving Haiku, Anne-Lise. Very well penned #7. T.J
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:12:00 AM
- Teppo, thank you for visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2016 6:41:00 PM
Sorry, missed to put 7. Now done.
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:11:00 AM
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Date: 4/13/2016 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful poem filled with heartfelt emotion tear drifting from empty shells. 7+ sure. Loved always my lovely lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:11:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely a 7 visit and comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2016 3:30:00 PM
Feelings drip from the emotions in this excellent pen Anne lise wishing you a blessing of warm light
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:10:00 AM
- Liam, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2016 3:30:00 PM
A haunting write Anne...nicely penned
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Date: 4/13/2016 8:45:00 AM
- Joseph, thank you for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2016 2:46:00 PM
sometimes, it's also nice to read you with a sad mood and tone.. so beautiful, anne.. happy day and huggs!
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Date: 4/12/2016 2:59:00 PM
- Thank you for visits and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2016 1:07:00 PM
I've been learning from your Haikus and I've learned from this one also! A Haiku write of dark light! The feeling of "Without Feelings!"
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Date: 4/12/2016 1:12:00 PM
- It makes me happy, Walter :) - Thank you for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2016 6:46:00 PM
Hugs, we both have a touch of this melancholy today.
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:44:00 AM
- ......not every day "the sun" shining, Casarah - Thank you for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2016 5:54:00 PM
This too shall pass, Anne-Lise. Lovely haiku. Peace pretty lady:)
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:42:00 AM
- .......... new day...... new opportunities :) - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2016 5:36:00 PM
beautiful my poetic friend
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:38:00 AM
- Thank you for visits and lovely comments, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2016 4:09:00 PM
beautiful but sad Anne Lise:-) hugs Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:37:00 AM
- One human .... young and beautiful - full of lies makes me sad, Jan - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2016 3:51:00 PM
Hi Anne, Amazing haiku......with love.
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:07:00 AM
- Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2016 3:22:00 PM
when the shell is empty...there is little that can be redeemed. Sunshine, keep your chin up. Hugs
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:06:00 AM
- ........or stupid as an empty bottle, dear Eileen :) - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2016 2:41:00 PM
A very moving haiku A-L...splendid
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Date: 4/11/2016 2:58:00 PM
- One human .... young and beautiful - full of lies makes me sad, Tim - Thank you for support, visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)