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- Haiku X 77 - Broken Heart -

Your lips look so soft 
Silent tears in the pillow
Stay a bit longer









24.03.2016
A-L Andresen :)

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Mick Talbot

Date: 1/18/2018 12:08:00 AM

Lascivious grace defined, inspired a tanka thank you. Best wishes... Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2018 1:26:00 AM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Mick :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Tom Arnone

Date: 5/7/2016 10:10:00 AM

Caught my eye -- "Stay a bit longer." A better than average haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2016 12:21:00 PM

- ....... Tom, never say goodbye ........... thank you, until we meet again :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/17/2016 12:51:00 PM

oh love this one Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2016 1:30:00 PM

- Phyllis, thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/17/2016 11:24:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, i thought, i need to read a Haiku today and i wished it to be soft and gentle. Where else would i go? I new it would be you. So many of your Haiku are filled with Gentle words and soft imagery. This is another excellent Haiku my friend. This one does touch the heart with its sadness Anne-Lise. Your words sing in there beauty as always my friend. This has to be a seven and it floats so gently into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2016 1:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit a 7 + fav. and lovely comments, Mike :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

M Asim Nehal

Date: 4/1/2016 1:14:00 PM

Awesome......Please read my reply haiku Smooth Departure.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2016 1:20:00 PM

- M. Asim, thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 3/26/2016 9:13:00 PM

Ummm. Yes! Notice the role of the title, like a bookend function.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2016 6:13:00 AM

- Gerald, many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/25/2016 5:55:00 PM

You melted my heart with this one! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2016 1:18:00 PM

- Arthur, many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments on haiku 77 :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/25/2016 1:49:00 PM

Excellent haiku on broken heart. Nothing is to be done in such situation. Extremely sad poem beautifully pictured my lovely lovely friend. 7+ i feel. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 1:57:00 PM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Sneha Nair

Date: 3/25/2016 1:08:00 PM

simple, but heart touching lines

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 1:23:00 PM

- Sneha, many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/25/2016 11:03:00 AM

Anne Lise, this is so gracefully penned, wonderful and I love that image too, 7 ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 12:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit a 7 and lovely comments, B.W. :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

Date: 3/25/2016 9:26:00 AM

Great haiku you have here. Thanks for sharing. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 9:40:00 AM

- Moon Flower, many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/25/2016 8:44:00 AM

engrossing. each moment is new. love Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 9:11:00 AM

- Nice to see you, Rajat - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/25/2016 7:03:00 AM

A moving piece Anne-Lise. Hope you have a Happy Easter! ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 9:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/24/2016 9:35:00 PM

Tears...miniature eye waterfalls! Cleansing!Few words, many things said! Nice Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 5:31:00 AM

- Walter, many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2016 6:21:00 PM

ahhh, So sweet. I really like it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 5:31:00 AM

- Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2016 6:13:00 PM

awhh, so sentimental, anne... ehat a beauty!.. happy thursday and huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 5:30:00 AM

- Nette, many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2016 4:53:00 PM

aww:-( beautiful but sad Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2016 5:30:00 AM

- Jan, many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

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