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- Haiku X 56 - Emotions -

Your heat hungry lips I want to freeze this moment I feel your heart beat Such a strong romance A billion stars in the sky Peace ... love ... harmony More than words express Emotions shown by touch You make my head spin 16.05.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/14/2015 5:08:00 AM

'Emotions' is a poem that clarifies love and romance. Enjoyable haiku, a pleasure to read Anne~Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/14/2015 10:33:00 AM

- Delice, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane M Quinlan

Date: 6/5/2015 1:42:00 PM

Loved reading your Emotional Haiku. Very heart felt. Thanks for sharing I lover versed Eastern poety/......didee

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2015 1:47:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/3/2015 10:20:00 PM

Anne-Lise, another wonderful poem. Hugs dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2015 7:44:00 AM

- Eve, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/1/2015 3:23:00 PM

A romantic series of haiku. Nicely done. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 4:00:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2015 7:41:00 AM

A lovely string of haiku, Anne Lise. Intensely written and very romantic. Have a lovely Sunday. hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2015 7:49:00 AM

- Paul, thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/23/2015 3:52:00 PM

Beautiful pen Anne Lise!So much love and passion in this piece.Emotions and romance show very powerful here in your romantic haiku:)A 7!Loved it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you!:)Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2015 4:12:00 AM

- Thanks Dorian, for a 7 the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/21/2015 5:52:00 PM

Extraordinary! Such powerful emotions so lovingly expressed in strict HAIKU form. Well done Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/22/2015 2:48:00 AM

- Keith, thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/19/2015 12:47:00 PM

Fantastic poem so touched and emotive..........well penned,I like it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2015 1:15:00 PM

- A pleasure to share with you :) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 5/19/2015 9:48:00 AM

Exactly, yes, and i love this poem. I could picture images. well written Hugs from Bryan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2015 11:42:00 AM

- Bryan, thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/19/2015 8:48:00 AM

Intensely romantic Anne Lise :) love it! xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2015 11:42:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Wilma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2015 12:03:00 PM

Very emotive and expressive work..I wonder who the lucky person could be? Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2015 3:53:00 AM

- I am married, Sara ..... it is enough with one man :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/18/2015 11:37:00 AM

Anne-Lise, romantic, sensual, passionate, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, the storm

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2015 3:55:00 AM

- B.W. your words are "food", that my poems going to live - Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 5/18/2015 7:25:00 AM

Always so pleased to find another poet who enjoys writing haiku. It will be a pleasure to read your Eastern poetry ~Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2015 7:59:00 AM

- I "had to" teach me how Haiku poems should be written ..... I was so excited by reading Haiku poems - A form I love to read and write, Delice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/17/2015 2:50:00 PM

This is a well written haiku. Its full of passion and desire. 7 -Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2015 8:01:00 AM

- Alexis, thanks for visiting a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/17/2015 2:00:00 PM

what a heady, dreamy 'ku, anne.. love them all.. happy national day and have fun!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2015 8:00:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/17/2015 1:38:00 PM

sparkling haiku anne lise really love the vision painted in this excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessed day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2015 1:48:00 PM

- A pleasure to share with you, my friend Liam :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/16/2015 3:33:00 PM

A great moment of love healing with romance. Excellently done. 7 is sure. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2015 4:01:00 AM

- Your words are as necessary to me as air and sunlight ... your words are my food, that my poems going to live - Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2015 3:04:00 PM

such a romantic string of haiku Anne lise:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2015 3:56:00 AM

- Love is magical :) - Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/16/2015 1:28:00 PM

Such intense emotions are almost indescribable. You've captured that feeling so well here. Very nicely penned, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2015 3:53:00 AM

- A pleasure to share with you, Kelly :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nandita Das

Date: 5/16/2015 9:58:00 AM

A beautiful string of haikus. I like the second one the best. Peace, love and harmony. Awesome. 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2015 2:01:00 PM

- Nandita, thanks for always lovely words on my poems - I greatly appreciate your visit my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/16/2015 9:53:00 AM

Lovely...such romance in this poem, Anne. "You make my head spin"...haha...such potent love. Liked it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2015 1:57:00 PM

.... Oh.... you make me sooo dizzy ..... (but, it is many years ago .... lol) - Always a pleasure to be visited by your smile, dear Kim - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)