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- Haiku X 55 - You Make My Day -

My wish for the day Lips that share the love so sweet Wonderful feelings Come little closer Although it's raining outside You make the world bright 09.05.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 1/25/2016 12:10:00 PM

I have been editing what I thought was haiku. Thanks to people like you, so versed in the art, I have more to go. Your works illuminate.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2016 12:14:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Iris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/3/2015 10:22:00 PM

Anne-Lise, another wonderful poem a 7. Hugs dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2015 7:44:00 AM

- Eve, thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/1/2015 3:18:00 PM

Nice romantic write. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 4:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/23/2015 4:06:00 PM

Beautiful pen Anne Lise!A very sweet and romantic beautifully written haiku my dear friend.Wow!I truly enjoyed this one Anne.You're really very good writing in this form you know that:)Always keeping you and your dad family in my prayers everyday Anne.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 4:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane M Quinlan

Date: 5/15/2015 7:42:00 PM

I can see why you like this style of poetry. This is very romantic a thought with a wish for love. I love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2015 5:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/13/2015 3:10:00 PM

Sweet and romantic! Lovely words for any day.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2015 3:48:00 PM

- Dear Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/13/2015 10:40:00 AM

A sweet smile with love makes a day sure. Beautifully expressed my lovely friend. 7 i feel. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2015 12:29:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2015 10:32:00 PM

Beautiful haiku Anne... thanks for stopping by...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2015 1:55:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Joseph :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Hannington Mumo

Date: 5/11/2015 6:55:00 AM

I'm waiting to read more of your haikus. Where are they?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2015 6:59:00 AM

- I've written 55 haikus - You are welcome :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/11/2015 5:20:00 AM

sweet beautiful haiku anne lise wishing you a lovely week dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2015 7:00:00 AM

- One kiss, calling on the next :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hannington Mumo

Date: 5/11/2015 4:37:00 AM

You never go wrong with haikus and it is abundantly evidenced in this scintillating piece. 7+!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2015 4:53:00 AM

- Small words and love gives life worth living :) - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, Hannington :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jonathan Medida

Date: 5/10/2015 11:45:00 PM

this is awesome even in few words, thats why i love haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2015 3:02:00 AM

- Many believe that it is easy to write Haiku - A "lazy" way to write poetry, but I like few word that says a lot :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jonathan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Corrina Leblond

Date: 5/10/2015 8:34:00 PM

Sweet thoughts, few words with big meaning, i love lips that love :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2015 2:58:00 AM

- Not always necessary with many words :) - Thank you for your words and pleasant visit Corrina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 5/10/2015 6:56:00 PM

May all your wish come true. Happy Mother's Day to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2015 2:55:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Iris :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2015 2:20:00 PM

may you be always be blessed with life's beauty,anne.. splednid 'ku.. happy mom's day!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 2:28:00 PM

- You make my day, Nette :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome

Date: 5/10/2015 9:45:00 AM

That's my wish too and you always make my day. what a beautiful write. I fee so romantic now. you have an amazing talent. my best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 12:30:00 PM

- Let us live for the beauty and small kiss :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 5/10/2015 8:35:00 AM

This is so lovely and so sweet my dear friend, Anne Lise! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your kind visit and inspiring words on my poem. Have a blessed day my dearest friend! Happy Mothers Day as well although your celebration there is Feb. Here in Thailand, we'll again celebrate in Aug. on the Princess' birthday. Wishing you a great weekend! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 12:44:00 PM

- I thank you my friend Leonora, for the blessing you are ... for the pleasure in your words ... ... and for the warmth in your hugs - <3 and hugs right back to you // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/9/2015 6:34:00 PM

My Dear Anne-Lise . . . Most Enchanting indeed! And a "7." Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 12:33:00 PM

- Small words and love gives life worth living :) - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, dear friend Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade

Date: 5/9/2015 5:14:00 PM

Luscious lips -- a hot wire to my heart!! Lovely Ms. Andresen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 12:18:00 PM

- Do you know, David ? - How to get beautiful lips (?) ..... say only good words :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/9/2015 4:42:00 PM

Short, sweet and to the point, this Haiku is beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 12:03:00 PM

- It is the ability to see and experience the beauty that makes people to be human - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/9/2015 4:21:00 PM

Passionate work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for dropping by..In Nepal, I am sure that it will take a long time to heal..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 11:55:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2015 3:58:00 PM

We cant wish more anything more Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 12:08:00 PM

- As beautiful as life itself ... a small kiss :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/9/2015 12:21:00 PM

Lovely 'ku! Soupmail. HUgs! Kim :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 11:58:00 AM

- I am so glad you are here - it helps me to understand how beautiful the world is :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2015 11:32:00 AM

I won't let my husband ever live the house without a kiss, you never know what the future brings. Love your poem , Anne-Lise, a 7, sorry my mind wondered off.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 11:52:00 AM

- Kiss him and tell that you love him - None can not rewind the time, Eve - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/9/2015 9:02:00 AM

aww very sweet ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 7:06:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)