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08.06.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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continuous thread by marking one's life's passage - a silk worm cocoon

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2025 12:57:00 PM

very nice. I liked the thread as metaphor for life passage.

Anne Winter

Date: 6/10/2025 5:23:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, this haiku is so beautiful and thought-provoking! The idea of leaving a lasting thread or legacy is really touching. You've woven something truly special here! Best, Anne

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/9/2025 6:47:00 AM

Silky and smooth and very imaginative. Great material from a tiny worm. Well written, dear Anne-Lise.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/9/2025 1:16:00 AM

Wonderful fabric. A worm of truth and eloquence.

Valsa George

Date: 6/8/2025 8:37:00 PM

The image and the poem are equally attractive, dear Anne. In India, silk sarees are in great demand and silk worm rearing is a flourishing industry. Love and hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/8/2025 12:01:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "silky smooth" Haiku write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away...............

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2025 11:12:00 AM

your delightful haiku are always exquisite Anne-Lise! hugs Jan xx

Jay Narain

Date: 6/8/2025 10:54:00 AM

Great haiku. We get a glimpse on how silk is woven.

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08.06.2025

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