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24.05.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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A fruity haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 

2nd place in the contest

- Haiku X 360 - watermelon -

                                       summer refreshment
                                       delicious watermelon -
                                              antioxidants
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Date: 6/15/2025 3:20:00 AM
Well done, Anne-Lise. First time I've seen "antioxidants" in a poem! Congrats.
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Date: 6/14/2025 12:08:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "watermelon" write again. Yesterday, I got another watermelon. We love them here. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Date: 6/14/2025 11:23:00 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku. -hugs
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Date: 6/14/2025 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations! So sweet!
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Date: 6/14/2025 4:07:00 AM
Congrats on the win Anne-Lise. One of my favorite fruits. In fact I just planted some sugar baby watermelon plants in my garden.
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Date: 6/14/2025 12:34:00 AM
Yum. I think it's my favorite fruit. Congrats
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:17:00 AM
Anne-Lise, it has some very good qualities! It's great in warm climates since it also does provide hydration! Quite a sweet treat!! Smiles!
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Date: 5/25/2025 9:06:00 PM
I do agree. Watermelon is so much sought after in the sweltering heat of summer. Quite healthy too. Lovely haiku. All the Best, Anne. Hugs!
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:49:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, When my husband was alive, he would juice a water melon. I really enjoy water melon that way. I do not eat water melons anymore. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:47:00 AM
What a wonderful "watermelon" write with a fun picture. I love cold watermelon. Had some last night. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hugs... Have a fun day eating away........
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Date: 5/25/2025 6:07:00 AM
My favorite treat. And one of the most healthiest things we can eat!
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Date: 5/25/2025 5:56:00 AM
One of my favorite desserts. In fact we just had some the other day. Like the picture with it. Good luck in contest
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Date: 5/25/2025 4:41:00 AM
I love watermelon and your delightful little poem has made me want some Sweet Sunshine! Ha…..Debx
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Date: 5/25/2025 1:16:00 AM
This is perfect. You did perfect, not as in 'you done good', but 'you done perfect.' This one delivered a lot, first, I want the watermelon, I love it and your words 'deliciousfy' it (just made that word up, you like?), second, because the ending really pivots just as it should be a Haiku ... CayCay
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Date: 5/24/2025 11:15:00 PM
The fruit I love most. Wonderful and succulent. Well done Anne Lise. Hugs.
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Date: 5/24/2025 9:44:00 PM
The feeling of refreshment is well evoked by these lines. Wonderful imagery! Best wishes.
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Date: 5/24/2025 7:49:00 PM
ohhh, you make my day delicious... i just had watermelon for breakfast...succulent 'ku, anne!
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Date: 5/24/2025 4:31:00 PM
On time! Markets here are full of fresh watermelons. Pithy cute poem! hugs AA
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Date: 5/24/2025 2:51:00 PM
Ahhh!!! She looks as if that is a slice of heaven. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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