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30.04.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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red-hot intense heat flowing lava starts sizzling - fiery void of hell

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/30/2025 3:54:00 PM

This is an impressive haiku, Anne-Lise! The word choices are so evocative of an erupting volcano! The picture is well suited, too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2025 2:11:00 PM

That sure describes it

Jay Narain

Date: 4/30/2025 10:41:00 AM

Nice picture and true volcano eruption poem. Nice work.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/30/2025 8:47:00 AM

a perfect description of a volcano erupting, anne-lise (not that i've ever seen that in person!)...

Deb M

Date: 4/30/2025 8:18:00 AM

“Fiery void of hell” powerful line there Sunshine! Wellsaid…Debx

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/30/2025 7:21:00 AM

hell it is, wonderful haiku, thanks poet anne lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2025 7:29:00 AM

- Yann, thank you very much for reading :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/30/2025 7:03:00 AM

Yep! Whether here or down below~ hell is hell. Well said.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2025 7:06:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/30/2025 6:56:00 AM

Watched it in Iceland, it must be terryfying to be in its path. Hope your weather has improved Anne Lise. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2025 7:04:00 AM

- The weather is brilliant today, Tom ... a beautiful spring day in the sunshine :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs