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09.02.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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the crumbling stardust caged nightingale does not sing - tomorrow's tombstones

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I Am Anaya

Date: 2/27/2025 11:32:00 AM

Caged but breaking free, wishing for hope, Breathtaking!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2025 10:14:00 AM

Anne-Lise, The crumbling stardust hints at something big going on. In a way, our environmental destruction places all us birds in tomb's cage. As go the birds, go we all. It's a haunting poem indeed, and hopefully it will motivate us to live in harmony with rather than exploit our surroundings!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/13/2025 9:06:00 AM

I feel no bird should be caged. They were meant to fly free. Love the art with your haiku. Have a wonderful day. Happy Valentines my friend. love phyl

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2025 4:44:00 AM

Powerful. Spoken for the birds seeking freedom :)

Ink Empress

Date: 2/12/2025 1:08:00 AM

" tomorrows tombstones" i lovee lovee that! How clever is the word pairing there dear anne lise! A well written haiku as always and true the caged nightingale does not maybe sing from their heart and soul. This really is soul touching! I felt this one! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Paige Hind

Date: 2/11/2025 7:13:00 PM

Absolutely breathtaking - <3

John Read

Date: 2/11/2025 7:08:00 AM

So sad to see a cadge bird, your Haiku says it all Anne. xx

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/11/2025 5:22:00 AM

Very nice and meaningful words in expressing the deep pensiveness.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/11/2025 2:18:00 AM

A pretty haiku, but with a somber note. A good write.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/10/2025 7:12:00 PM

Deep impact! CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2025 3:10:00 PM

Excellent imagery,.

Jay Narain

Date: 2/10/2025 11:17:00 AM

Strong poem with great art.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/10/2025 6:37:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, this haiku is wonderful so much sorrow and truth blended into so few words. It lingers, heavy yet ethereal, like a silent echo of something lost. A masterpiece in its brevity. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/9/2025 4:45:00 PM

haunting poem, so creative and emotional, thanks poet

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/9/2025 2:43:00 PM

Very impactful! Wonderful art, Anne; you are so talented.