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12.09.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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when sunset fadeth the autumn's adolescence - with jagged fragments

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Date: 11/10/2024 12:07:00 PM
Anne-Lise, you are a true haiku master. This haiku is just wonderful, Hugs~ Warren
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Date: 9/30/2024 10:46:00 AM
Anne-Lise...you describe so easily what we see all around us at this time of year. Your work is such a pleasure to read. I live how this poem starts in such a moving fashion. It's something very creative and unusual. Smiles!!
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Date: 9/20/2024 4:03:00 PM
This is a wonderful way to describe autumn. It's a lovely haiku.
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Date: 9/17/2024 12:17:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your autumn Haiku write. Sad flower picture... Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.................
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Date: 9/17/2024 8:17:00 AM
Exquisite haiku with tints of sadness my dear poet friend. Love reading this gem tonight. Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs
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Date: 9/13/2024 2:49:00 PM
My mom’s flowers from her funeral were sunflowers. I brought them home and watched them fade. Great haiku.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2024 12:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2024 8:37:00 AM
A sad but beautiful picture
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Date: 9/16/2024 12:10:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Karen :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2024 2:05:00 AM
If this is a dying sunflower, we need it for oil. Lovely haiku and picture. Hugs.
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Date: 9/16/2024 12:09:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 9/12/2024 2:03:00 PM
Very elegant with a touch of sadness in this well written haiku. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 9/16/2024 12:09:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

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