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- Haiku X 331 - bottle green -

                                  through bottle green waves
                                   glassy surface of the deep -
                                            mysterious tide

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Paul Callus Date: 8/9/2024 11:54:00 AM Those bottle green waves are capable of tricking any unwary mind, Anne-Lise! I like how you combined the bottle and glassy surface. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/9/2024 6:15:00 AM The sea holds many secrets Anne-Lise, hope you are keeping well. Tom Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 7/30/2024 6:41:00 PM Of what we know about the earth, the land masses, by comparison we know so little about the sea, 75% the worlds surface. Lovely image and words, Anne -- causing us to sink deeper into the liquid green depths of mystery. Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 7/29/2024 9:37:00 PM Lovely poem at nature through your haiku. Loved that first line the most. Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 7/28/2024 8:44:00 AM Anne-Lise, you have a wonderful way to describe a beautiful sea. It makes me smile! You are especially keen at describing all these fabulous places, which I assume are local. Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 7/28/2024 4:55:00 AM Anne-Lise, I love the images conjured by your beautiful haiku! It created a wonderful feeling for me! i hope you've been well, Happy Sunday xxoo Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/27/2024 3:39:00 PM Anne-Lise, beautiful and inviting. -hugs Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 7/27/2024 2:05:00 PM I like this vision. Much movement occurs below the surface. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 7/27/2024 12:26:00 PM A fresh and welcome tide..May within your Words reside.' May its depths exolored.' Enliven the bored..no alcahol bottles required Per se!! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 7/27/2024 12:08:00 PM Quite so,a mysterious tide, you have always been excellent with your Haiku. Well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 7/27/2024 9:53:00 AM Wow thats a beautiful picture! And what a beautiful haiku, i love the way youv written it especially “glassy surface of the deep” absolutely gorgeous! Pleasure reading your work dear anne lise, sending you light always Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/26/2024 9:43:00 PM Fascinating imagery, dear Anne Lise. Well done. Hugs. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/26/2024 7:16:00 PM bottle green waves bring to mind a message in a bottle. Like this! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 7/26/2024 3:48:00 PM I like your description of the waves , Nicely done Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2024 3:30:00 PM your haiku are always exquisite Anne-Lise - so good to see you back posting, you have been missed. hugs jan xx Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 7/26/2024 1:51:00 PM Oh the beautiful mint colors, the imagery you pen, in your unique ku's Anne-Lise, nice to see you back. I'm stepping out for a while ha, see you soon! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/26/2024 1:59:00 PM - I'm just dropping by for a quick visit, Anaya ... - enjoy the summer ... the soup will have to wait until darker days ... thanks for your comment :) - hugs