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26.07.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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through bottle green waves glassy surface of the deep - mysterious tide

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/9/2024 11:54:00 AM

Those bottle green waves are capable of tricking any unwary mind, Anne-Lise! I like how you combined the bottle and glassy surface. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/9/2024 6:15:00 AM

The sea holds many secrets Anne-Lise, hope you are keeping well. Tom

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/30/2024 6:41:00 PM

Of what we know about the earth, the land masses, by comparison we know so little about the sea, 75% the worlds surface. Lovely image and words, Anne -- causing us to sink deeper into the liquid green depths of mystery.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/29/2024 9:37:00 PM

Lovely poem at nature through your haiku. Loved that first line the most.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/28/2024 8:44:00 AM

Anne-Lise, you have a wonderful way to describe a beautiful sea. It makes me smile! You are especially keen at describing all these fabulous places, which I assume are local.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/28/2024 4:55:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I love the images conjured by your beautiful haiku! It created a wonderful feeling for me! i hope you've been well, Happy Sunday xxoo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/27/2024 3:39:00 PM

Anne-Lise, beautiful and inviting. -hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/27/2024 2:05:00 PM

I like this vision. Much movement occurs below the surface.

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/27/2024 12:26:00 PM

A fresh and welcome tide..May within your Words reside.' May its depths exolored.' Enliven the bored..no alcahol bottles required Per se!!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2024 12:08:00 PM

Quite so,a mysterious tide, you have always been excellent with your Haiku. Well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 9:53:00 AM

Wow thats a beautiful picture! And what a beautiful haiku, i love the way youv written it especially “glassy surface of the deep” absolutely gorgeous! Pleasure reading your work dear anne lise, sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2024 9:43:00 PM

Fascinating imagery, dear Anne Lise. Well done. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2024 7:16:00 PM

bottle green waves bring to mind a message in a bottle. Like this!

Tom Woody

Date: 7/26/2024 5:03:00 PM

Long time no see. Hope you've been well. Real life is so much more engaging. Awesome haiku

Joseph May

Date: 7/26/2024 3:48:00 PM

I like your description of the waves , Nicely done

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2024 3:30:00 PM

your haiku are always exquisite Anne-Lise - so good to see you back posting, you have been missed. hugs jan xx

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/26/2024 1:51:00 PM

Oh the beautiful mint colors, the imagery you pen, in your unique ku's Anne-Lise, nice to see you back. I'm stepping out for a while ha, see you soon! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/26/2024 1:59:00 PM

- I'm just dropping by for a quick visit, Anaya ... - enjoy the summer ... the soup will have to wait until darker days ... thanks for your comment :) - hugs