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- Haiku X 322 - the eclipse -

                                       wow - total eclipse
                                when the skies start to darken -
                                      diamond wedding ring

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2024

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Duke Beaufort Date: 5/27/2024 5:24:00 PM Anne-Lise, we went to Canada to experience totality. Diamond ring for sure before and after! It's kind of like putting it on to try and then taking it off. Too bad the marriage or engagement doesn't last longer! Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/19/2024 10:45:00 AM Had a partial eclipse here and the day just got a bit darker. Was outside as it was happening. Nice haiku to go with it. love phyl Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 4/11/2024 9:17:00 AM Your Haiku eloquently depicted that exact moment, Anne-Lise. That eclipse was indeed a blessing to see. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2024 10:57:00 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/11/2024 2:49:00 AM Aptly descriptive one about the eclipse. All the pictures I have seen of it are amazing. The way it affected the world in the partial state here was eerie feeling. It lasted a long time as well with only a partial eclipse. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Did you take the picture? Sara K Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2024 3:02:00 AM - There was no solar eclipse here in Norway... no, it's a "borrowed" picture, Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

I Am Anaya Date: 4/10/2024 4:26:00 PM What an exciting day that was, Anne-Lise, You've marked it with a soulful Haiku. Loved the wedding ring! hugs~Anaya Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2024 1:57:00 AM - Many thanks, Anaya :) - hugs

Joe Dimino Date: 4/10/2024 9:43:00 AM Very nice, Anne; have a beautiful day! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/10/2024 12:14:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/10/2024 3:17:00 AM Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful imagery. Hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/10/2024 6:02:00 AM - Many thanks, Victor :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/9/2024 7:15:00 PM Anne-Lise, a great haiku, there was a couple in Maine who wed during the eclipse. -Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/10/2024 2:07:00 AM - A wedding that had to be planned at the exact time ... the minutes were ticking - A memorable moment for a lifetime, Tania :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 4/9/2024 10:44:00 AM I noticed that. It was a beautiful sight. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:06:00 PM - I'm sure it was exciting minutes and beautiful to experience, Jay :) - hugs

Don Iannone Date: 4/9/2024 9:06:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I Love your haiku! "diamond wedding ring" is great imagery! Cheers, Don Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:04:00 PM - Many thanks, Don :) - hugs

Heidi Sands Date: 4/9/2024 8:43:00 AM Yes , so many gorgeous photos like a diiamond ring! Beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise! Hugs :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:04:00 PM - Many thanks, Heidi :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough Date: 4/9/2024 6:48:00 AM I enjoyed this poem. Like some wedding bands, eclipse didn't last long. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:04:00 PM - Many thanks, Hilda :) - hugs

Mike Gentile Date: 4/9/2024 4:14:00 AM Anne-Lise, I love your metaphor of a ' diamond wedding ring"!! to encapsulate the beauty of the eclipse! Great one!! Happy Tuesday xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:03:00 PM - Happy Tuesday, Mike and thanks :) - hugs

Aurore Severo Date: 4/9/2024 12:59:00 AM I saw it today, amazing! xoxo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:03:00 PM - You are lucky to have experienced it, Aurore :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Tonye George Date: 4/8/2024 8:39:00 PM It's a beautiful experience. A fight between two lovers. Nice one Anne. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:02:00 PM - Many thanks, Tonye :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/8/2024 6:55:00 PM congrats Anne, shine on with this one ~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:01:00 PM - Many thanks, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/8/2024 5:22:00 PM An amazing haiku! It is in my faves. Best wishes. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 1:01:00 PM - Many thanks, Evelyn :) - hugs

Yann Rolland Date: 4/8/2024 2:50:00 PM very nice image, wish there was a wedding somewhere in heavens thanks poet Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 12:59:00 PM - Thanks, Yann :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/8/2024 2:39:00 PM I enjoyed reading your Haiku write. What a pretty picture... Be happy today as you write away............. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 12:59:00 PM - Thanks, Paula :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 4/8/2024 2:34:00 PM Good if you can watch it. Great haiku Anne. Totally eclipse of the heart. Loved it. Hugs/María Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 5:34:00 AM - No, we didn't have a solar eclipse in Norway Maria :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jan Allison Date: 4/8/2024 2:09:00 PM that final line is just perfection Anne-Lise! hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 5:36:00 AM - Many thanks, Jan :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/8/2024 12:45:00 PM how cool is that! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2024 5:36:00 AM - Thanks, Kim :) - hugs