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20.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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a fleeting moments winter's crystal clear ballet - in drowsy slumber

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Silent One

Date: 1/21/2024 12:48:00 PM

Lovely imagery.. love that second line..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2024 2:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 8:49:00 AM

'Winter's crystal clear ballet" Oh how so beautifully described dear Anne-Lise. I loved reading your eloquent words, quite whimsical and fascinating in their vividness.. It painted such a unique imagery in my mind.. Gorgeous haiku, keep writing & shining always. Sending many best wishes & light :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2024 2:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Hiya :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/21/2024 8:38:00 AM

you've beautifully captured the graceful beautify of snow...an outstanding Haiku...I was left a little breathless...enjoy your Sunday, hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2024 2:40:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

John Lawless

Date: 1/21/2024 6:36:00 AM

beautifully captured Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2024 2:40:00 AM

- Thank you very much, John :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2024 4:21:00 PM

an absolute joy to read Anne-Lise the imagery is sublime and goes with the picture so well:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2024 2:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jan :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/20/2024 2:25:00 PM

A very peaceful scene in your haiku Anne-Lise. I bet it looks amazing outside. Big storm heading for the uk tomorrow, 80mph winds and heavy rains forecast.. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2024 2:03:00 AM

- Wooow...stay indoors, Tom - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 1/20/2024 2:18:00 PM

You really should put together your haiku with the photos you've chosen in a binder as a keepsake. Each one is beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2024 2:06:00 AM

- Yes, I understood :) - (It was Jan who said that) - Thanks :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 1/21/2024 2:03:00 AM

I didn’t mean to publish. I meant for yourself. It would be a beautiful collection.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2024 2:02:00 AM

- Thanks for the good suggestions, Lin :) - hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2024 2:00:00 AM

It's a difficult process in Norway, Jan - (and expensive ... I wouldn't earn a single penny) ... and the poems are in English ... - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2024 4:21:00 PM

i think she should publish them Lin, she is an exceptional writer of the form:-) hugs jan xx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/20/2024 1:59:00 PM

This poem, in traditional Haiku, is short but full of thoughts. It caused me to feel a surge of reverence for the majesty of winter.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2024 2:11:00 PM

- Haiku is always short ... but, can say a lot in its three lines ... many thanks for your comment, Hilda - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs