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- Haiku X 293 - By the Coast -

                                 cheers from the bleachers
                                  enveloped in raging storm -
                                        exclamation points

                                       landward painfully
                                  the foaming furious waves - 
                                        depth focus motion

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Yann Rolland Date: 10/15/2023 6:24:00 PM marvellous images, so descripttive and moving, bravo poet Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 10/15/2023 1:02:00 PM Wow! Incredible photo and write. You get a FAV! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/15/2023 7:11:00 AM Boy!! That wave is treacherous looking. Great descriptive write about the view. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K..I would not want to be out there in that swell. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/15/2023 2:47:00 AM Perfect haikus. You're so good at them. Blessings. Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/15/2023 12:41:00 AM Those waves, oh my, sometimes they come with cathartic symphonies and other times, they can being harsh atoms of raging colours! This one explores the gigantic & furious nature of the oceans, "landward painfully the foaming furious waves" Ahh, your haiku writes are always brilliant, dear Anne-Lise, I loved reading this! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/14/2023 7:33:00 PM I enjoyed reading your haiku Anne, Very nicely penned Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/14/2023 2:12:00 PM Your "by the coast" write tells/shows power. Hugs... Have a blessed weekend.......... Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 10/14/2023 11:32:00 AM Ah i was just traveling, crazy waves and tides, it was today! Love this haiku! “ Enveloped in raging storm “ furious waves” they can get pretty bad. I love also how you wrote “ exclamation points “ how creative and clever! Brilliant Login to Reply