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Storm along the coast today
14.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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cheers from the bleachers enveloped in raging storm - exclamation points landward painfully the foaming furious waves - depth focus motion

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Yann Rolland

Date: 10/15/2023 6:24:00 PM

marvellous images, so descripttive and moving, bravo poet

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/15/2023 1:02:00 PM

Wow! Incredible photo and write. You get a FAV!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2023 7:11:00 AM

Boy!! That wave is treacherous looking. Great descriptive write about the view. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K..I would not want to be out there in that swell.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 10/15/2023 2:47:00 AM

Perfect haikus. You're so good at them. Blessings.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/15/2023 12:41:00 AM

Those waves, oh my, sometimes they come with cathartic symphonies and other times, they can being harsh atoms of raging colours! This one explores the gigantic & furious nature of the oceans, "landward painfully the foaming furious waves" Ahh, your haiku writes are always brilliant, dear Anne-Lise, I loved reading this!

Joseph May

Date: 10/14/2023 7:33:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your haiku Anne, Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/14/2023 2:12:00 PM

Your "by the coast" write tells/shows power. Hugs... Have a blessed weekend..........

Ink Empress

Date: 10/14/2023 11:32:00 AM

Ah i was just traveling, crazy waves and tides, it was today! Love this haiku! “ Enveloped in raging storm “ furious waves” they can get pretty bad. I love also how you wrote “ exclamation points “ how creative and clever! Brilliant