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- Haiku X 233 - October Frost -

moment not in vain
                             a touch of last golden leaves - 
                             the smell of winter

                             spun shiny crystals
                             exquisite beauty as deemed -
                             farewell is breathed in

                             trembling on the twig
                             it's too late to mourn lost youth -
                             dead and neglected








24.10.22
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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/28/2022 1:55:00 PM

Ah ~ finding beauty in the simplest of things... nature at its best

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/28/2022 11:51:00 AM

Anne Lise you bring a breath of sunshine into this remaining courageous, yet lonely, leaf decorated by "spun, shiny crystals!" Your imagery is so stunning. Enjoyed this haiku string! Congratulations on your win! Warm autumn blessings and a hug!

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 10/27/2022 5:48:00 PM

This poem hits home and I resonate with the sentiments

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2022 3:10:00 PM

Back with congrats!

Howard Kerr

Date: 10/26/2022 10:55:00 AM

Sunshine Smile, Hi this is Howard. You have written an excellent trio of Haikus full of meaning and depth. Congratulations on your placement on merit Thanks as always for your soupmail contact

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/26/2022 8:40:00 AM

Stopping by with congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I knew it would be in the top. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 10/25/2022 5:06:00 PM

excellent imagery in this fine triple Haiku for the contest, Sunshine. A winner to me! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/25/2022 1:36:00 PM

… trembling on the twig

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/25/2022 4:38:00 AM

Dear AnneLise, oh, my! These Haikus sparkle with delight and utter beauty, I see a winner. Huggs, Pangie

Valsa George

Date: 10/25/2022 12:04:00 AM

Fantastic haiku series ..... so apt for the cusp between autumn and winter! Admire this master creation . Love and hugs, dear friend!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/24/2022 7:49:00 PM

Anne-Lise, i love your country, As well as a fan of your poetry, i go on many 'Train cab drive' on 'You Tube' through so many scenic places which you bring to life constantly, here on soup, this poem another gem, i treasure. Harry.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2022 10:04:00 AM

- Surely many nice places to see ... but, take a trip to Norway and experience it with your own eyes ... (I will be visited by a mutual friend at the soup in May 2023 ... looking forward to it :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/24/2022 5:48:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise, You have penned a well written and meaningful string of haikus. Well done. Have a nice day- Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2022 9:59:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Alexis ... you 2 :) - hugs