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moment not in vain a touch of last golden leaves - the smell of winter spun shiny crystals exquisite beauty as deemed - farewell is breathed in trembling on the twig it's too late to mourn lost youth - dead and neglected 24.10.22 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand 5th place in the contest www.howmanysyllables 5 - 7 - 5

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Date: 10/28/2022 1:55:00 PM
Ah ~ finding beauty in the simplest of things... nature at its best
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Date: 10/28/2022 11:51:00 AM
Anne Lise you bring a breath of sunshine into this remaining courageous, yet lonely, leaf decorated by "spun, shiny crystals!" Your imagery is so stunning. Enjoyed this haiku string! Congratulations on your win! Warm autumn blessings and a hug!
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Date: 10/27/2022 5:48:00 PM
This poem hits home and I resonate with the sentiments
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Date: 10/26/2022 3:10:00 PM
Back with congrats!
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Date: 10/26/2022 10:55:00 AM
Sunshine Smile, Hi this is Howard. You have written an excellent trio of Haikus full of meaning and depth. Congratulations on your placement on merit Thanks as always for your soupmail contact
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Date: 10/26/2022 8:40:00 AM
Stopping by with congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I knew it would be in the top. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/25/2022 5:06:00 PM
excellent imagery in this fine triple Haiku for the contest, Sunshine. A winner to me! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 10/25/2022 1:36:00 PM
… trembling on the twig
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Date: 10/25/2022 4:38:00 AM
Dear AnneLise, oh, my! These Haikus sparkle with delight and utter beauty, I see a winner. Huggs, Pangie
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Date: 10/25/2022 12:04:00 AM
Fantastic haiku series ..... so apt for the cusp between autumn and winter! Admire this master creation . Love and hugs, dear friend!
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Date: 10/24/2022 7:49:00 PM
Anne-Lise, i love your country, As well as a fan of your poetry, i go on many 'Train cab drive' on 'You Tube' through so many scenic places which you bring to life constantly, here on soup, this poem another gem, i treasure. Harry.
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Date: 10/26/2022 10:04:00 AM
- Surely many nice places to see ... but, take a trip to Norway and experience it with your own eyes ... (I will be visited by a mutual friend at the soup in May 2023 ... looking forward to it :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 5:48:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, You have penned a well written and meaningful string of haikus. Well done. Have a nice day- Alexis
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:59:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Alexis ... you 2 :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 4:40:00 PM
Anne-Lise this is a poetic gem. Love your theme and the perfect picture to reflect on. Blessings my Dear...
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:58:00 AM
- Many thanks for your support and kind words, Michael :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 11:25:00 AM
These are great Haiku. Well written :)
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:58:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 11:08:00 AM
You have a knack for writing wonderful haikus. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:57:00 AM
- Victor, thank you very much :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 8:06:00 AM
Lovely set for the fall, Ann Lise.
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:57:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 7:06:00 AM
Wonderful haikus, and Gorgeous and distinctive imagery as well as, is your poem, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:56:00 AM
- many thanks for your support and kind words, Las :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 7:00:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Brian should love this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/25/2022 1:01:00 PM
- Thank you for your kind words and wishes, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 5:51:00 AM
Beautiful and unique photo--as is your poem, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/24/2022 6:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs
Date: 10/24/2022 4:25:00 AM
Lovely haiku, Anne-Lise. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs//Charlie
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Date: 10/24/2022 5:42:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs