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                                  My bed is lonely
                                  the glow of your naked body
                                  The winter breathes on me





07.11.2013
A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 5/21/2014 12:48:00 PM
Great Haiku... will definitely be reading some more of yours!
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Date: 5/21/2014 12:52:00 PM
- You're welcome, John :))) - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2013 10:20:00 PM
Very nice, Anne Lise. I felt a shiver as I read it. Cheers. - Gary
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Date: 11/24/2013 5:58:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Gary. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2013 7:52:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! I was looking for haiku's and found one of yours... of course I wasn't disappointed! Very touching, and I can feel the coldness too. Love, Diane
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Date: 11/23/2013 3:36:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Diane. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2013 4:55:00 PM
Well.. I love haiku.. Nd I should say I love this.......... Blessings.
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Date: 11/14/2013 2:49:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment M.T. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 9:50:00 AM
this is really good. you should put an "s" on breathe unless you mean the noun form breath. Love the imagery.
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:57:00 AM
- :)))) .... you are the teacher :)))
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:55:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 8:05:00 AM
Wow!Good one Anne Lise!Thanks for visiting my page.
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Date: 11/9/2013 8:06:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Kash. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 7:52:00 AM
you paint a nice picture here...one can feel the loneliness...great haiku :)
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:55:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sandra. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 7:13:00 AM
hmmm how I wish to have that glow (^____^) LOL. lovely Haiku friend Anne :) cheers!!
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:44:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 6:12:00 AM
Love your Haiku. Very best wishes Linda x
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:43:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 10:49:00 PM
Wake him up and tell him you need a hug. Great Haiku!
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Date: 11/9/2013 3:02:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 4:28:00 PM
Ohhh, I can just feel this. Beautifully done... Jack
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:33:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 9:25:00 AM
Ooooh...sensual glows? Mmm, dig it! Nicely done!
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:36:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Drake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 6:46:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:35:00 AM
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Date: 11/7/2013 5:08:00 PM
thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 11/8/2013 3:22:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 2:16:00 PM
Browsing through the list, I found your verse to be worthy of my reading time. Warm is your style!
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Date: 11/7/2013 2:19:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Ashley. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 1:23:00 PM
Heart touching poem it's. Beautifully adorned the secrecy of loneliness. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/7/2013 1:25:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 1:16:00 PM
very touching and lovely!
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Date: 11/7/2013 1:25:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Ilene. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 11:31:00 AM
Winter is a time to snuggle when it is cold
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Date: 11/7/2013 11:33:00 AM
.... "snuggle"... :) - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:59:00 AM
beautifully crafted piece
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:15:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:58:00 AM
you bring out the fire on a cold winter night, anne... wow, passion sweetly burning.. fine day to you..: hugggs
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:15:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:57:00 AM
Very lovely picture of the winter's effects, Anne
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:14:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:02:00 AM
An excellent, powerful and romantic, poem!
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Date: 11/7/2013 8:05:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 7:28:00 AM
Kind of sad..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:30:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 7:12:00 AM
Intense Anne-Lise, just love this :) xoxo
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:16:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Wilma. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 6:28:00 AM
Romantic! ;) Yes....that is a lovely glow indeed! Thanks for your sweet post of a few minutes ago. Love you!
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:56:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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