Get Your Premium Membership

- Haiku X 21 - Missed You -

My bed is lonely the glow of your naked body The winter breathes on me 07.11.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 5/21/2014 12:48:00 PM
Great Haiku... will definitely be reading some more of yours!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 5/21/2014 12:52:00 PM
- You're welcome, John :))) - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2013 10:20:00 PM
Very nice, Anne Lise. I felt a shiver as I read it. Cheers. - Gary
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/24/2013 5:58:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Gary. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2013 7:52:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! I was looking for haiku's and found one of yours... of course I wasn't disappointed! Very touching, and I can feel the coldness too. Love, Diane
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/23/2013 3:36:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Diane. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2013 4:55:00 PM
Well.. I love haiku.. Nd I should say I love this.......... Blessings.
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/14/2013 2:49:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment M.T. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 9:50:00 AM
this is really good. you should put an "s" on breathe unless you mean the noun form breath. Love the imagery.
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2013 10:57:00 AM
- :)))) .... you are the teacher :)))
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2013 10:55:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 8:05:00 AM
Wow!Good one Anne Lise!Thanks for visiting my page.
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2013 8:06:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Kash. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 7:52:00 AM
you paint a nice picture here...one can feel the loneliness...great haiku :)
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2013 7:55:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sandra. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 7:13:00 AM
hmmm how I wish to have that glow (^____^) LOL. lovely Haiku friend Anne :) cheers!!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2013 7:44:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2013 6:12:00 AM
Love your Haiku. Very best wishes Linda x
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2013 7:43:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 10:49:00 PM
Wake him up and tell him you need a hug. Great Haiku!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2013 3:02:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 4:28:00 PM
Ohhh, I can just feel this. Beautifully done... Jack
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/8/2013 4:33:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 9:25:00 AM
Ooooh...sensual glows? Mmm, dig it! Nicely done!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/8/2013 11:36:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Drake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2013 6:46:00 AM
: )
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/8/2013 11:35:00 AM
: )
Date: 11/7/2013 5:08:00 PM
thanks for stopping by.Sara
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/8/2013 3:22:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 2:16:00 PM
Browsing through the list, I found your verse to be worthy of my reading time. Warm is your style!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 2:19:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Ashley. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 1:23:00 PM
Heart touching poem it's. Beautifully adorned the secrecy of loneliness. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 1:25:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 1:16:00 PM
very touching and lovely!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 1:25:00 PM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Ilene. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 11:31:00 AM
Winter is a time to snuggle when it is cold
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 11:33:00 AM
.... "snuggle"... :) - Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:59:00 AM
beautifully crafted piece
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 9:15:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:58:00 AM
you bring out the fire on a cold winter night, anne... wow, passion sweetly burning.. fine day to you..: hugggs
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 9:15:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:57:00 AM
Very lovely picture of the winter's effects, Anne
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 9:14:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 8:02:00 AM
An excellent, powerful and romantic, poem!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 8:05:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 7:28:00 AM
Kind of sad..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 7:30:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 7:12:00 AM
Intense Anne-Lise, just love this :) xoxo
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 7:16:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Wilma. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/7/2013 6:28:00 AM
Romantic! ;) Yes....that is a lovely glow indeed! Thanks for your sweet post of a few minutes ago. Love you!
Login to Reply
Smile Avatar
Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/7/2013 6:56:00 AM
- Thanks for reading my haiku number 21 - pleasant with your comment Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
12