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Summer is over on the ground under oak tree Yellow heart leaves 28.08.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/27/2013 3:45:00 PM
Lovely imagery. I do enjoy a good haiku and this is really good! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/27/2013 3:48:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Laura. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2013 9:04:00 AM
I like haiku.. they are short and a bit odd so they are perfect for me....ur poem for some reason makes me mellow
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Date: 10/11/2013 11:13:00 AM
- Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Evrod, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 11:37:00 AM
Anne Lise really enjoyed your haiku congrats on placing Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/25/2013 11:53:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulation, Shadow ... friendly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 7:04:00 AM
wonderful haiku Anne...congrats on your win
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Date: 9/25/2013 7:13:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulation, Joseph ... friendly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful images...congrats on win!^_^ Y.L.N
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Date: 9/25/2013 6:53:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulation, Yvette ... friendly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 4:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Anne
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Date: 9/25/2013 6:32:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulation, Dr. Ram ... friendly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2013 11:52:00 PM
so cute this is. Congrats.
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Date: 9/25/2013 2:52:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and congratulation ... friendly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2013 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT
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Date: 9/25/2013 2:51:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and congratulation ... friendly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/15/2013 1:07:00 AM
beautiful xxxxx duncan
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:21:00 AM
- Duncan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2013 1:06:00 AM
yellow heart...i see there is a hidden meaning...u write so nicely Anne...keep it up !
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Date: 9/9/2013 1:10:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comments, Red. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2013 6:35:00 PM
Beautiful. Lovely image, and so many possible meanings that can be read into that great last line.
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Date: 9/7/2013 2:50:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comments, Scott. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/3/2013 8:31:00 AM
I love your diffferent hearts... captured perfectly ...very much enjoyed reading this :)
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Date: 9/3/2013 10:01:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comments, Karen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/3/2013 7:49:00 AM
I'm so excited my favourite season is upon us! You've captured it wonderfully in a few short lines. Cheers, Rach
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Date: 9/3/2013 10:00:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comments, Rachel. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/1/2013 5:38:00 PM
The leaves are certainly starting to give way to Autumn Anne Lise, a lovely write. Take care, Richard
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Date: 9/2/2013 1:35:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/30/2013 1:57:00 PM
A beautiful haiku. It's still summer where I am, and hot, but autumn is in the air. I sent you a soup mail. Jack
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:59:00 PM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/30/2013 11:19:00 AM
Very creative poem enjoyed. Loved the yellow heart leaves. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/30/2013 11:30:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/30/2013 2:26:00 AM
ohh, i am delighted by your autumn's near arrival, anne... what a lovely friday for me... and you!..:) hugggs
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Date: 8/30/2013 5:20:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 11:29:00 PM
Yes it seems summer is over , but that just makes it cooler weather ;} very nice Anne Lise, lov & hugs ;} thank you for liking my Dawn ;}
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:27:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 6:29:00 PM
Oh my dear loyal Miss Norway! You were the FIRST to make me feel welcome here on the Soup... I have not forgotten! A very sweet descriptive write dear lady! Big warm hugs, Jack xoxoxox
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:27:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 1:19:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful. Bring on Fall!!!
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Date: 8/29/2013 1:23:00 PM
- Thanks for the visit and Nice comments, Drake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 12:59:00 PM
Dear Anne Lise, I really love your gorgeous Haiku . In few words you paint a canvas of beauty.
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Date: 8/29/2013 1:01:00 PM
- Thanks for the visit and nice comments, Mustapha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 12:07:00 PM
I like yellow leaves...I want to rest under that tree listening to the soft winds..thanks for sharing this friend Anne..Have a nice day Love, maria
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Date: 8/29/2013 12:09:00 PM
- Thanks for the visit and sweet comments, Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 11:07:00 AM
That last line made me smile--something about the color yellow, and of course hearts-- put smiles on faces. This is a happy read, Anne Lise! Sending you and your lovely family hugs! Thanks for passing by-- I see other Soupers have had spikes in their views as well-- weird, isn't it?
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:15:00 AM
- Yes, it is Nikko. - Thank you for the; L O V E ! - Thanks for the visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 10:39:00 AM
love this, so visual in such few words...
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Date: 8/29/2013 10:49:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Harry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2013 6:58:00 AM
A great poem!!! Love it. Simply flawless. You did an incredible job of writing this one. Hugs, Karla~
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:11:00 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Karla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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