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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/20/2021 6:05:00 AM

so sweet ~ beautiful write

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 1:47:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your comments, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/19/2020 8:01:00 PM

we are all different yet alike, though people always point out another's imperfections quicker than their beauty... great write Anne-Lise :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2020 4:03:00 AM

- So true, Sandra - Thank you so much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/19/2020 3:16:00 PM

What a great picture...shows his nakedness to the world, the world he will eventually overwhelm with his beauty!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2020 4:01:00 AM

- Kim, thank you so much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/18/2020 2:58:00 PM

lets hope the ugly duckling turns into a beautiful swan and can rise above the negativity - reminds me of soup at times:-( hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2020 4:00:00 AM

- Absolutely a picture of the "heavenly soup", Jan - Thank you so much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alison Hodges

Date: 2/18/2020 1:11:00 PM

Beautiful and to the point with class

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 1:25:00 PM

- Thank you so much for your comments, Alison :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/18/2020 7:04:00 AM

We are not weaklings. Who cares what the crowd says? They are mindless ninnies. Plenty of "ugly" people have turned their scars into stars. Punch a bully back of we end up as punching bags throughout life. Nonetheless..poem=wonderful Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 1:09:00 PM

- The flock is like a fine and inclusive community - But history has taught us that the human flock has its shadow sides, Panagiota ... a lot of it doesn't look pretty with today's glasses ... - Thank you so much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/18/2020 6:59:00 AM

So true to life--well said, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 12:58:00 PM

- Abandoned by the herd ... also people lose their flock occasionally, they disappear from humanity ... live in solitude, Vijay - Thank you so much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/17/2020 5:54:00 PM

Thankfully many draw strength from rejection and come out on top. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 9:56:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/17/2020 5:52:00 PM

A great haiku with a great message Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 9:55:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your comments, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/17/2020 2:45:00 PM

I guess there will always be bullies, unfortunately. Simple fairy tales teach all sorts of lessons. There is beauty in uniqueness. Wonderful lesson here, A-L

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 9:51:00 AM

- "There is beauty in uniqueness" ... there you said it ... that's exactly what I mean, Daniel :) - Thank you so much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming

Date: 2/17/2020 1:51:00 PM

This is so of course...things never change. Well -- maybe one day! Food for thought. :) john

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/17/2020 2:05:00 PM

- Always someone who must go alone, although this is from an old fairytale ... both humans and animals - Thank you so much for your comments, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)