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a tough existence winter cold rain or wet snow - not many bright hours they freeze on their feet a matter of finding food - care through the window to avoid the death hungry birds on the feeder - happy feathered friends 13/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/17/2019 3:04:00 PM

Beautiful. Thoughtful poem, Sunshine.

Bette Bavington

Date: 11/23/2019 7:09:00 AM

To take care of God's creatures is a blessing. The songs they give back to us melts the cold winters snow. Lovely done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2019 12:46:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Bette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/14/2019 10:20:00 PM

Oh, those sweet birds and a caring poem Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:21:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/14/2019 10:41:00 AM

Anne-Lise, 'Not many bright hours' for our bird friends. Very nice. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:20:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/14/2019 7:03:00 AM

I love birds and you reminded me that I need to fill my feeder. Love to you, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:20:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/13/2019 8:19:00 PM

i often wonder if most birds fly south to find warmth or what they do for food...i know my hummingbirds stopped feeding before fall arrived so guessing they went somewhere warmer... great penning, love this :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:20:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2019 6:40:00 PM

sweet set. I love watching them at a feeder. They brighten winter days.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2019 2:18:00 PM

Excellent Anne-Lise..the imagery you painted is from first hand knowledge in your part of the world..splendidly done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2019 1:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2019 1:42:00 PM

I have often wondered about the birds and the cold. I do keep several feeders in my yard to keep them fed throughout the winter, but are they cold? Nicely done Anne-Lise. Your heart shines throughout this wonderful poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2019 1:48:00 PM

- Yes, many birds freeze to death in winter, Chris - A big heat loss and an increased need for food - (dies of hunger and cold) - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Na Na

Date: 11/13/2019 1:18:00 PM

Great write Smile. I love birds myself. We have a bird feeder in the yard and I enjoy just watching them outside the window. Its brings peace a lot even when times are strife. Thanks for sharing this

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2019 1:33:00 PM

- I haven't prepared mine for the winter yet ... but, it's coming - A joy with bird song throughout year - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)