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-  'bian pao' ... small popping fireworks

... on the ground  ... not in the air -

hibernation sleep fireworks or "bian pao" - progress and new life 28/03/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved howmanysyllables.com Haiku 5-7-5

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Date: 3/30/2019 9:55:00 AM
Your poem is captivating, and I captured your photograph. Is it yours, Anne-Lise?
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Date: 3/30/2019 2:45:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Caren - No, it's not my private photo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2019 9:42:00 PM
I wish I knew what 'bian pao' means, or why I love your haiku despite not knowing the meaning. And the picture - oh, to be there! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/30/2019 2:44:00 PM
- 'bian pao', CayCay ... small popping fireworks ... on the ground ... not in the air :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 10:06:00 PM
A lovely haiku, Sunshine. Best wishes in the contest :)
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Date: 3/29/2019 5:35:00 AM
- Many thanks P.M., for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 8:05:00 PM
Beautifully written , Sunshine. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 3/29/2019 5:34:00 AM
- Many thanks Eve, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 7:07:00 PM
A fireworks of blooms..Nicely penned Anne..
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Date: 3/29/2019 5:31:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 3:47:00 PM
fascinating, anne.. we used the same word; i'll edit mine...happy huggs!
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Date: 3/29/2019 5:34:00 AM
- Yes, I noticed it ... but it doesn't matter ... you win, Nette :) - Do not delete :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 9:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem to read today :)
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Date: 3/28/2019 2:44:00 PM
- Many thanks Heidi, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 8:14:00 AM
Love this! CayCay
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Date: 3/28/2019 2:43:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 7:28:00 AM
Excellent and explosive haiku. Well penned. Good luck my friend.
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Date: 3/28/2019 2:42:00 PM
- Many thanks Ravi, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 7:13:00 AM
Such colorful new life in your photo..and your poem evokes the same, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 3/28/2019 2:42:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 6:56:00 AM
The explosion of new life and colour, lovely image sunshine. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 3/28/2019 2:41:00 PM
- Many thanks Tom, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2019 5:46:00 AM
Miraculous awakening my dearest friend, Anne-Lise as it is your Haiku! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/28/2019 6:10:00 AM
- It is my Haiku ... :))) - Many thanks for visiting and great comment, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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