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Vulkanen Fuego spyr ut voldsomme mengder røyk og aske etter utbruddet søndag. Utbruddet er det kraftigste vulkanen har hatt på over 40 årVulkanen Fuego spyr ut voldsomme mengder røyk og aske etter utbruddet søndag. Utbruddet er det kraftigste vulkanen har hatt på over 40 årVulkanen Fuego spyr ut voldsomme mengder røyk og aske etter utbruddet søndag. Utbruddet er det kraftigste vulkanen har hatt på over 40 årVulkanen Fuego spyr ut voldsomme mengder røyk og aske etter utbruddet søndag. Utbruddet er det kraftigste vulkanen har hatt på over 40 årUtbruddet fra Vulkanen Fuego i Guatemala har gjort stor skade. Foto: Oorlando Estradag/AFP photo/NTB Scanpix

earth cracked ~ lava spurts sulfur dioxide gas kills a heartbreaking loss 07/06/2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Magicicada Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy www.howmanysyllables.com : 5-7-5 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 6/20/2018 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome haiku! Well done!
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Date: 6/21/2018 4:09:00 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/16/2018 1:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Anne-Lise with this very meaningful haiku. Regards :)
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Date: 6/16/2018 1:58:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Anne-Lise, excellent Haiku. :))
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Date: 6/15/2018 2:38:00 PM
- Many thanks Roy, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 12:15:00 PM
Nicely done haiku,Sunshine , love the imagery! Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~' *
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:33:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations Sunshine. Tom.
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:33:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations for your win! :)
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:32:00 PM
- Many thanks Heidi, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 9:33:00 AM
An impacting piece Anne-Lise, potent poem. A timely tender piece. Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thank you for your support :) xomo
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:30:00 PM
- A nice surprise, many thanks for my win in your contest Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 9:04:00 AM
Sunshine, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this meaningful haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:32:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 8:52:00 AM
Excellent haiku, my friend! Congratulations on a beautiful win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:31:00 PM
- Many thanks Pandita, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2018 8:46:00 AM
very current response, may our prayers be for their physical safety intervene despite the loss of property. This is a great analogy of the breaking forth of the cicada.
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:31:00 PM
- Many thanks R.A.P., for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2018 6:36:00 PM
We have been so worried about Connie and others who live in Hawaii. Your haiku is well-composed and very timely too, Sunshine. Sending winning wishes your way, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/14/2018 3:19:00 AM
- It must be terrible to live as close to a volcano, Carolyn - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2018 2:28:00 PM
I feel sorry for anyone is the area and for the loss. Excellent haiku. love phyl
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Date: 6/13/2018 2:32:00 PM
- A terrible disaster, dear Phyllis ... so many dead - Thank you for your words and friendly visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2018 4:21:00 PM
This eruption reminds me of the cicadas' explosive moment when they leave the depths of darkness and fly to freedom, Anne-Lise! The difference lies in their contrasting effects of joy and sadness. Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/12/2018 1:43:00 PM
- Here they "fly" right into death ... scary encounter with the volcano, Paul - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2018 7:14:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing your magicicada Ku today, Sunshine.
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:37:00 AM
- Thank you Andrea, for your words and friendly visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2018 8:38:00 AM
Heartbreaking Indeed.
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Date: 6/9/2018 8:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2018 8:31:00 AM
A haiku about the darker side of nature-brilliant! Well done, Anne-Lise. Warren :)
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Date: 6/9/2018 8:33:00 AM
- The world has many colors, Warren :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/8/2018 5:51:00 PM
Isn't it sad and scary with two volcanos erupting at the same time. All the lives lost in Guatemala and the heartbreak for those who lost loved ones and friends. Enjoyed reading your well thought out work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/9/2018 8:28:00 AM
- A terrible disaster, dear Sara ... so many dead - Thank you for your words and friendly visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/8/2018 2:56:00 PM
Well done, Anne-Lise! An onsite journalist reporting recently on the volcano in Hawaii (can't epell it) was overcome with fumes. I saw this on the news. Janice
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Date: 6/8/2018 2:59:00 PM
- A terrible experience, Janice - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/8/2018 1:48:00 PM
a burst of fine images, anne... your volcanic poem is aflame!.. happy huggs
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Date: 6/8/2018 1:53:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/8/2018 9:26:00 AM
And a heartbreaking haiku you have crafted, Anne-Lise! Spot on xxoo
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Date: 6/8/2018 12:02:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/8/2018 6:51:00 AM
Those who live near the volcanoes suffered loss..Nicely expressed Anne
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Date: 6/8/2018 6:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/8/2018 5:53:00 AM
Brilliant, Anne-Lise, yes the lava creating new land, but at what cost? love the Haiku.
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Date: 6/8/2018 6:20:00 AM
- It costs human life and a lot of sadness, Harry - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/8/2018 3:33:00 AM
Excellent Haiku describing a horrific reality my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xx
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Date: 6/8/2018 4:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/7/2018 11:11:00 PM
Nice imagery...Horrifying death...All the best Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/8/2018 4:04:00 AM
- Many thanks Arturo, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/7/2018 10:51:00 PM
Small lines that paint large.. terrific write, Sunshine!
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Date: 6/8/2018 4:02:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Chance Summer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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