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storm autumn new season sharp colors for the eyes gloom in rest destiny cold darkness moonlight lamp cat and mice enter house ~ Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: charles messina ~ ( howmanysyllables.com/syllable ) 04.10.2018 2nd place in the contest 04.10.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/29/2018 6:58:00 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your contest win. Your multiple Haikus here are very artfully done. Most Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2018 7:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and kind congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2018 6:46:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, just dropping by with my slightly belated congratulations on your win in the contest. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/10/2018 6:58:00 PM
- A few hours to a new day wakes up ... another night without sleep - Many thanks for your visit, comment and congratulations Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2018 6:34:00 AM
Lovely Haikus..... I really like the first one and the third one. Congratulation for the win Sunshine.
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Date: 10/10/2018 7:50:00 AM
- Many thanks Augustus, for your kind congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 10:39:00 PM
Nicely done, Sunshine, congratulations on your win <3
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Date: 10/10/2018 3:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful string of haikus, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 10/10/2018 3:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 4:18:00 PM
lovely string of haiku Anne Lise:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2018 3:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations for the great win, anne lise.
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Date: 10/10/2018 3:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 1:03:00 PM
Back with congratulations Sunshine. Tom.
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Date: 10/9/2018 1:06:00 PM
- Many thanks for your kind congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 11:56:00 AM
CONGRATS Sunshine to win. LoveJHY
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:19:00 PM
- Many thanks, for your kind congratulations Anisha :) - What means : "JHY" ? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 11:52:00 AM
LOVE your last stanza - particularly funny when we picture them entering together. Congrats on your top win, Sunshine. Well deserved podium finish.
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:17:00 PM
- Many thanks Line, for your kind congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 11:37:00 AM
Loved the imagery Anne-Lise, best wishes....
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:15:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and best wishes, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 10:29:00 AM
This is excellent Anne-Lise! A great of a new form of poetry. Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest...hugs Charlie :)
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:09:00 PM
- Many thanks for my win, nice to attend Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 9:45:00 AM
Great haiku , Anne -Lise, Congratulations on your win. Sending hugs ~Warren
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:10:00 PM
- Many thanks for your kind congratulations, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2018 6:53:00 AM
Enjoyed each and every image you projected, Anne-Lise. I see you provide shelter for both cat and mice:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:14:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, comment and kind congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:01:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Anne-Lise:) A merited podium finish! Hugs // paul
Date: 10/8/2018 7:34:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, wonderful imagery in your Haiku gems. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. My favoutite season comes to life......AUTUMN! Your golden Haiku go into my faves. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/8/2018 12:25:00 PM
- Nice to see you, Mike :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/5/2018 7:02:00 PM
smiling till the end, anne...delightful read with tom and jerry in the scene..happy huggs
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Date: 10/8/2018 12:25:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/5/2018 4:17:00 AM
A necklace of Haiku pearls dearest, Anne -Lise. Good luck my friend. Hugs! XXX
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Date: 10/8/2018 12:24:00 PM
- Nice to see you, Demetrios :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2018 9:56:00 PM
Wow... Cute haikus... Well done,Anne
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Date: 10/8/2018 12:21:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2018 4:21:00 PM
Short words, but great imagery..
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Date: 10/8/2018 12:20:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2018 2:51:00 PM
Your words evoke meaning and imagery..so much said in just a few words..best for a win, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/8/2018 12:20:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2018 1:41:00 PM
The last three verses had me smiling, I can picture this.
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Date: 10/4/2018 1:45:00 PM
- I like your smile, Caren :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2018 1:25:00 PM
That was fun to read. Nicely done
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Date: 10/4/2018 1:43:00 PM
- Nice to see you, Chris :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2018 12:28:00 PM
Nice string of haiku Sunshine. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/4/2018 12:31:00 PM
- Haiku for me is 5-7-5 - ... but, fun to try this :) - Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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