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Å?G?L§ Ip †h£ ?ki

Distant as a dream,

                                      miracles seeking gusto

                                     Wild triumph and victory

                                    Clouds with cotton wings

                                  The joy of your own heartbeat

                                ... new life will sprout on the path








19.03.2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka - 
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3rd place in the contest

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Date: 4/18/2020 5:35:00 PM
What a lovely, celestial sedoka, Anne-Lise:-) Congratulations on your winning my contest. Love that photo of cloud with cotton wings!
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2020 1:11:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Anne-Lise! Janice
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Date: 4/17/2020 1:44:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Janice ... much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2020 12:46:00 AM
Clouds with cotton wings.. Great imagery and a positive vibe in those lines.. Congrats Anne..
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Date: 4/17/2020 1:44:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jenish ... much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2020 11:33:00 AM
Miracles seeking gusto - just what we need at present - your imagination soars with this poem my friend. I'm sorry you can't move into your newhome - is Norway also in a lock down? Blessings and hugs and safe thoughts coming to you dear soul sister. Jenny.
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Date: 3/26/2020 12:34:00 PM
- Norway has been in a lockdown for two weeks now ...we finally got the kitchen across the border from Denmark this week ... but the carpenters are in Lithuania and are not allowed to enter Norway ... we really need a miracle, my friend Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2020 6:20:00 PM
Dreams deferred always seem distant and yet we hope...
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Date: 3/26/2020 9:36:00 AM
- Kim, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2020 7:54:00 AM
Now that is a great sedoka..
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Date: 3/26/2020 9:35:00 AM
- Many thanks S.O., for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2020 11:53:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, this is such a beautiful Sedoka, The lightness of each line does touch the heart. Your wonderful words paint such a special canvas within the mind. This poetic gem does give the heart peace. I hope you are well. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/26/2020 9:35:00 AM
- Mike, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2020 3:06:00 PM
Great line 'cloud with cotton wings' - good luck in the contest-
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:49:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Michelle ... take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2020 12:52:00 PM
i love the optimism displayed in this poem, anne-lise! it's what we all need now...
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:48:00 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comments, dear Ilene :) - Have a nice and safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2020 10:08:00 PM
your words fall gently down the page... love the photo... it goes well with your words.... hugs and blessings my friend!
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:45:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2020 6:29:00 PM
Nicely done Anne hope alls well. Tom
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:45:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2020 5:36:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise! Gee, poetess! Breathtaking Sedoku. Panagiota
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:41:00 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Panagiota :) - Have a great and safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2020 3:32:00 PM
So ethereal and optimistic dearest, Anne-Lise! Beautifully done! God bless you! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/20/2020 3:40:00 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comments, Demetrios :) - Have a nice and safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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