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      Light
      we need
      in our hearts
      Soft, brilliant glow
      Give

      Hold
      my hand
      Our journey
      the course is set
      Take








03/03/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Light up the Page Poetry Contest : Lanterne
Sponsored by: Joseph May
2nd place in the contest

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Date: 3/20/2019 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win; this one was definitely "over the top".
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Date: 3/20/2019 12:55:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/10/2019 10:17:00 PM
A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Sunshine - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/11/2019 6:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/10/2019 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations, Sunshine. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/11/2019 6:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/10/2019 6:29:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2019 6:15:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/9/2019 11:10:00 AM
Awesome, congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 3/9/2019 11:57:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/8/2019 11:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 3/9/2019 8:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/8/2019 9:13:00 PM
Be the light and be giving a wonderful message Anne Lise. love phyl
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Date: 3/9/2019 8:42:00 AM
- Phyllis, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2019 12:44:00 PM
It's uplifting to think that when we give "light" to others, it is returned to us. Lovely lanterne, Sunshine. Best wishes in Joseph's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2019 1:24:00 PM
- Be a light in our dark world ... it makes everyone happy, dear Carolyn :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2019 11:07:00 AM
so taken by this giving verse, anne... much enjoyed!... happy huggs
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Date: 3/4/2019 11:15:00 AM
- Many thanks, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2019 5:34:00 AM
Brilliant Lantern of give and take: You give more dearest, Anne-Lise than you take! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/4/2019 7:10:00 AM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and lovely comment, many thanks my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2019 4:41:00 AM
First of all, I would like to thank you for regularly visiting my work, I appreciate it. The form of a Lanterne is simple, yet it is extraordinarily difficult, as the few words written have to be precise, not to exceed the syllables. You did quite well in achieving this not only in composition but also the subject, especially the opposite words. I apologise for not visiting frequently.
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Date: 3/4/2019 5:17:00 AM
- Nice to see you Martin, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2019 1:11:00 AM
Oh wow, so beautiful anne lise!
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Date: 3/4/2019 1:14:00 AM
- Hugs and thank you very much, Arthur :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2019 3:34:00 PM
The light in our hearts that shines from within let's us see that a hand which is a simple thing is all we need. Good one. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/4/2019 12:28:00 AM
- Hi Bette - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2019 2:23:00 PM
Cute lanterne. Hugs
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Date: 3/3/2019 2:25:00 PM
- Many thanks, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2019 1:56:00 PM
Never heard of this form, thought it was a light. Trying to get my head around it. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 3/3/2019 2:01:00 PM
- Looks simple ... but, this didn't come out in one second :))) - Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2019 1:24:00 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise. The picture fits perfectly. Love it. A big sigh from me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/3/2019 1:43:00 PM
- It is the little things that give life value :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2019 1:16:00 PM
Its what life and relationships are all about Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2019 1:36:00 PM
- What is the meaning of life if we are not able to share ... :) - hugs and thank you very much, Jan :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2019 1:07:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is entry for the contest theme. Great content as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis
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Date: 3/3/2019 1:13:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely wishes and visit, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2019 12:24:00 PM
That is what life is all about..sweet sentiments!
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Date: 3/3/2019 12:41:00 PM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, many thanks Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)