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- Feelings of Guilt -

Hold back the tears of sorrow

                   Imprisoned in this torment bounded by guilt

                          As I write your name on the wall

                        I miss the days when you were here















02.02.2017
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Debbie Duncan Date: 5/8/2017 10:00:00 PM I for sure thought I read this before. Cute :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2017 3:23:00 AM - Debbie, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter Date: 3/4/2017 7:01:00 PM How did I miss this??? It's so dear! How broken hearted I would be if I lost my little companion. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2017 8:02:00 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie Date: 2/25/2017 1:11:00 PM Oh, the poor pup :-) your words are so poignant and the photo so funny..it took me a bit to put the two together.:-) A very clever, smart poem Anne-Lise, wonderfully crafted, an absolute pleasure to read. many blessings to you, lynn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2017 1:54:00 PM - Lynn, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon Date: 2/7/2017 4:30:00 PM With these lines and the illustration, I got awed. Nice craf, Anne. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/8/2017 2:07:00 AM - Thank you very much, for visit and comments, Adeniji :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White Date: 2/7/2017 3:25:00 AM Awwww, this made me snicker, how sad! LOL Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/7/2017 4:00:00 AM - Darren, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray Date: 2/6/2017 9:05:00 AM I love your idea of fun Anne-Lise. Yet another picture I must download, if you don't mind. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/6/2017 9:14:00 AM - The image is yours, Jean :) - Thank you very much, for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/5/2017 5:39:00 PM I guess the only way to get loose is when the lady toots! Too funny Sunshine~thanks for the chuckle!~Che :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 6:18:00 PM - Cheryl, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 2/5/2017 12:44:00 PM The poem in itself is quite sad, Anne-Lise. Then I look at the accompanying picture and sadness turns to laughter! Also, I love those cute tiny dogs running beneath the flowers:) Regards & Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 6:17:00 PM - Thank you very much Paul, for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Herlihy Date: 2/5/2017 9:00:00 AM It's true. Sorrow brings its own misery, but it makes for good poetry. JH Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 11:47:00 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft Date: 2/5/2017 8:03:00 AM Funny and sad x great words x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 8:14:00 AM - Thank you very much Wendy, for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Jennings Date: 2/5/2017 7:13:00 AM The words are so serious and the pic so darn funny that my head and heart are fighting this one out! Seems you got me! Hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 7:38:00 AM - CayCay, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 2/5/2017 6:15:00 AM Hello Sunshine...thanks for this funny treat...Nicely done Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 7:37:00 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett Date: 2/5/2017 6:01:00 AM Absolutely brilliant, you've got an amazing sense of humour Anne-Lise, Just what the doctor ordered a good laugh, thanks, Roy. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 7:37:00 AM - Thank you very much Roy,for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol B. Date: 2/4/2017 6:04:00 PM OMG this made me laugh. Thanks!! A fav. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 7:36:00 AM - Thank you very much for visit a fav. and comments, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/4/2017 8:03:00 AM ohh, this is so funny; love the way this pet was tucked! good one, anne and happy huggs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 7:35:00 AM - Nette, thank you very much for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 2/3/2017 10:33:00 PM LOL...we've got to be careful where we sit...I hope Foofoo was not hurt lol...great verse SS...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 7:35:00 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf Date: 2/3/2017 7:28:00 PM I'm still laughing at your pic! Makes it hard to concentrate on the poem itself! Great poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2017 7:34:00 AM - Thank you very much for visit and comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/3/2017 12:53:00 PM Anne-Lise, the picture you posted gave me a great laugh, but the poem stirred feelings of regret "imprisoned" in my heart. Sometimes I feel guilty that I lived so much longer than my husband. You captured this feeling beautifully! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/3/2017 1:05:00 PM - Oh, dear Carolyn a terrible guilt ... no one can decide on life or death ... I became really sorry by your comments - Enjoy your life my friend ! - hugs & hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/3/2017 10:06:00 AM The moral of the story: Never sit down when you have a small puppy and you are large! Haha! Love poem, hilarious picture! A seven dear, Anne-Lise! Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/3/2017 1:27:00 PM - :))) .... So true :) - Next time I am looking for one of my dogs ... now I know :))) - Many thanks for your visit a 7 and your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner Date: 2/3/2017 8:35:00 AM The poem is sweet but that picture is hilarious, Anne Lise. Poor little puppy:) Thanks for the laugh:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/3/2017 1:11:00 PM - Guilt is everything but, not sweet if you ask me - Glad the picture gave you a smile :) - Thanks for visiting and your comments, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 8:23:00 AM What seemed as if it should be dark and sad made me laugh out loud. Perfect my friend. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/3/2017 1:19:00 PM - I think it became very "dark" for the little puppy ... poor little thing :) - Many thanks for your visit and your comments, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2017 5:56:00 AM hilari'arse' lol fab poem and pic Anne lise thanks for the smile:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/3/2017 7:34:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and your smile, Jan ... it's so easy to lose small things :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)