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- Everything Is Better Barefoot -

Blue 
vision
Dipping toes
feel the softness
The warm breeze of the summer joys tempts me
Crystallized sand like feathers on the toes
Gold in my eyes
Breathe taking
and pure
bliss





05/09/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper 
# 2
3rd place in the contest

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Sarah Hassarati Date: 10/12/2020 2:07:00 AM Such a visual poem. Delightful. Thank you. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/12/2020 2:20:00 AM - Thank you very much, Sarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 10/8/2020 10:22:00 AM Great imagery and a wonderful picture! Loved the title you chose too.... ~ Ani Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/8/2020 11:50:00 AM - Thank you very much, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 10/1/2020 2:08:00 PM Oh, sounds heavenly! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 1:24:00 AM - Thank you very much, BJ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree Date: 9/24/2020 9:13:00 PM I have tender feet, lol. I always have. I feel what you're saying though. Love the pic and this write. It is very descriptive. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Love, Angela Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 2:01:00 AM - Tender feet need soft and warm sand, Angela :) - Many thanks for your comments ... welcome back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/24/2020 3:47:00 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, this poem has the feel of summer. i like ir. Hugs Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/25/2020 10:40:00 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, yes this poem felt like summer. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 1:58:00 AM - Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 9/24/2020 10:39:00 AM Love barefeet in the sand. I also love your verse, Anne-Lise. I want to run out and go right there. Nice imagery! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 10:40:00 AM - Thank you very much for your friendly support, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman Date: 9/22/2020 6:51:00 AM Love walking on the beach, especially in the evening. Lovely write Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/22/2020 7:10:00 AM - I always walk barefoot ... - Thank you very much, James :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Alkas Poetry Date: 9/21/2020 10:16:00 AM Beauty of the view of the feet in the soft sand warming the poet's feet ... Good sensations that awaken sandy poetry, a wonder... salute dear Anne-Lise alkas Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2020 10:26:00 AM - Thank you very much for your visit and the lovely comments, Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 9/20/2020 2:15:00 PM Yes indeed... You can literally get closer to nature if you take the time to walk in your bare feet... I really enjoyed this poem and the wonder it creates... Keep up the great writing, my friend :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2020 9:52:00 AM - I walk barefoot all year, Kelly ... hate socks :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera Date: 9/17/2020 7:41:00 PM Here, I am back to congratulate, Anne-Lise, on your win!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2020 9:50:00 AM - Always nice to see you, Newton ... many thanks for the congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 9/17/2020 7:10:00 PM Lovely write, Sunshine .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2020 9:49:00 AM - Thank you very much for my place on your winner list, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christopher Flaherty Date: 9/17/2020 3:05:00 PM Too true Anne-Lise Sad how this could be turned in its head and used and referenced in the same sentence as Barefoot and Pregnant Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2020 9:48:00 AM "Barefoot and Pregnant" (???) ... I'm not pregnant :)

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 9/10/2020 11:50:00 AM Anne-Lise I love this poem! beautifully done my friend!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 12:02:00 PM - A pleasure to hear ... thank you very much, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/10/2020 12:31:00 AM Simply outstanding, Anne-lise, mine on the same pic pales in comparison:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 6:52:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jo ... and yours was beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/9/2020 5:46:00 AM SO lovely, Anne-Lise. Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 6:50:00 AM - Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/8/2020 5:44:00 PM this is FANTASTIC, dear!! I chose that picture too. Just love that warm sand. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 6:50:00 AM - Andrea, thank you very much for your visit and the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 9/8/2020 2:09:00 PM Anne-Lise, this is beautiful, I love the line "Crystallized sand like feathers on the toes" a FAV for me _Constance Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 6:49:00 AM - Glad you liked my poem - Many thanks for your lovely comments and your priceless fave, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/8/2020 10:41:00 AM Pure bliss and certainly a pure win - so wonderfully describe I can feel the sand on my toes, and yes barefoot is great! Hugs and blessings dear friend. Jenny. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 6:47:00 AM - I hate socks ... I walk barefoot all year ... but, not when we have snow :) - Thank you very much for your lovely comments, dear sister :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera Date: 9/7/2020 11:14:00 AM The image is wonderfully represented in this piece!! A sure Top Win!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 6:45:00 AM - Many thanks for the uplifting comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 9/7/2020 6:36:00 AM A vision and feeling of bliss, Anne-Lise! Nowadays, cos of covid, I avoid sandy beaches which tend to get crowded...but yours is one which tempts :) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 4:49:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/7/2020 5:32:00 AM Just the thought of it...ahh! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 4:47:00 AM - Kim, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 9/6/2020 1:46:00 PM Great theme for this contest... You did this very well . Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2020 4:47:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/6/2020 1:29:00 AM Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I feel this sand and smell the salt in the air! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2020 2:12:00 AM - Warm sand ... feels lovely in the summer, Caren :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 9/5/2020 2:34:00 PM Lovely piece Anne-Lise, makes one think of days on beach we missed this summer. Have a blessed weekend,Gordon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2020 2:10:00 AM - Gordon, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/5/2020 2:19:00 PM My best to you on this.marvelous piece. Pangie xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2020 2:09:00 AM - Thank you very much for your comments, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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