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- Even Tears Freeze -

Cold,
numb 
In my
deep depths of
vanished existence
Runs in darkness without a goal
I never resting, goes in opposite directions
Unknown in wilderness without qualification, even tears freeze to ice crystals








03.01.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Writing Challenge January, 2019
 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
Fibonacci :  1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21
1st place in the contest


Poem of the Day: 05.01.2019

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2019

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Quoth Theraven Date: 9/14/2019 10:21:00 PM Sunshine, Even Tears Freeze. Even now in Summer's late genuflection. -Richard Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/15/2019 6:07:00 AM - Maybe ... even in the late summer, Richard - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anna Nixon Date: 1/29/2019 5:09:00 AM this speaks to my soul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2019 12:15:00 PM - A pleasure Anna, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 1/24/2019 2:18:00 PM Sadly beautiful, wistful. Congrats on all! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2019 3:15:00 PM - Many thanks Sandra, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/22/2019 3:14:00 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, just beautifully done. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2019 2:35:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark J. Halliday Date: 1/21/2019 8:00:00 AM Very nice. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2019 8:31:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gail Debole Date: 1/17/2019 6:12:00 AM Well done! Love it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2019 2:35:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Gail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/14/2019 10:39:00 AM One form I have never tried and congrats on your win. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:05:00 PM - This is my second Fibonacci poem, the last line is a bit difficult :) - Many thanks dear Phyllis, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 1/13/2019 6:40:00 AM Congrats on your win Anne.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:01:00 PM - Many thanks Joseph, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 1/12/2019 4:54:00 PM Superb Fibonacci, Anne-Lise, and so achingly beautiful ... blessings and congrats on your deserving win, my friend! :-) <3 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:00:00 PM - Many thanks Gregory, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. Date: 1/12/2019 1:33:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:00:00 PM - Many thanks Alexis, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier Date: 1/12/2019 1:30:00 PM Congrats on your top win, Sunshine. Well done. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:00:00 PM - Many thanks Line, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 1/12/2019 1:28:00 PM Anne-Lise congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci and I love the image too ~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2019 12:02:00 PM - Many thanks for choosing my poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/12/2019 11:46:00 AM Bravo, Sunshine. This is such a different style from you and one senses the pain that emanates from each line. Excellent writing, dear. Congratulations on your first-place win in Dear Heart's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2019 12:40:00 PM - Many thanks dear Carolyn, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valerie Staton Date: 1/10/2019 3:09:00 PM Thoroughly enjoyed! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2019 4:28:00 AM - Thank you very much, Valerie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 1/7/2019 1:36:00 PM Though it is a freezing winter, the beauty and depth of your poem warms the heart and the soul.. and deserves the honour of POTD.. Congratulations Anne-Lise.. keep shining and smiling.. Love and hugs of a happy new year and blessings. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2019 3:39:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Datu Date: 1/7/2019 12:35:00 PM A poem full of interest and deep phrases! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2019 12:38:00 PM - Thank you very much, Leon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/7/2019 9:56:00 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2019 12:11:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/7/2019 7:08:00 AM Splendid writing dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2019 7:10:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May Date: 1/6/2019 11:36:00 AM This is great Sunshine well done my friend Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2019 2:13:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/6/2019 9:55:00 AM nicely done, Sunshine, a great job on the Fibonacci verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2019 2:13:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 1/6/2019 5:28:00 AM What a wonderful depth in your expressions of a cold where even tears freeze- Unknown in wilderness without qualification, even tears freeze to ice crystals". Beautiful and touching. My good wishes for your contest entry dear friend. With best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2019 2:11:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Ravindra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. Date: 1/6/2019 3:08:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, Stunning imagery and deep content. Great write for the contest theme. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2019 2:11:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole Date: 1/5/2019 10:48:00 PM Yes, even tears can freeze. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2019 2:10:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin Date: 1/5/2019 8:12:00 PM Awesome, congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2019 2:09:00 PM - Many thanks Tania, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley Date: 1/5/2019 7:37:00 PM Returning with congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your evocative poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~ Susan Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2019 2:08:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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