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Frozen Tears by Jim Richey

Cold,
numb 
In my
deep depths of
vanished existence
Runs in darkness without a goal
I never resting, goes in opposite directions
Unknown in wilderness without qualification, even tears freeze to ice crystals








03.01.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Writing Challenge January, 2019
 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
Fibonacci :  1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21
1st place in the contest


Poem of the Day: 05.01.2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/14/2019 10:39:00 AM
One form I have never tried and congrats on your win. love phyl
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:05:00 PM
- This is my second Fibonacci poem, the last line is a bit difficult :) - Many thanks dear Phyllis, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2019 6:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win Anne..
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:01:00 PM
- Many thanks Joseph, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2019 4:54:00 PM
Superb Fibonacci, Anne-Lise, and so achingly beautiful ... blessings and congrats on your deserving win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:00:00 PM
- Many thanks Gregory, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2019 1:33:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:00:00 PM
- Many thanks Alexis, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2019 1:30:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sunshine. Well done.
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:00:00 PM
- Many thanks Line, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2019 1:28:00 PM
Anne-Lise congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci and I love the image too ~
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:02:00 PM
- Many thanks for choosing my poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2019 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Outstanding poem. :)
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Date: 1/12/2019 12:41:00 PM
- Many thanks Chantelle Anne, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2019 11:46:00 AM
Bravo, Sunshine. This is such a different style from you and one senses the pain that emanates from each line. Excellent writing, dear. Congratulations on your first-place win in Dear Heart's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/12/2019 12:40:00 PM
- Many thanks dear Carolyn, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/10/2019 3:09:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed!
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:28:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Valerie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 1:36:00 PM
Though it is a freezing winter, the beauty and depth of your poem warms the heart and the soul.. and deserves the honour of POTD.. Congratulations Anne-Lise.. keep shining and smiling.. Love and hugs of a happy new year and blessings.
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Date: 1/9/2019 3:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 12:35:00 PM
A poem full of interest and deep phrases!
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Date: 1/7/2019 12:38:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Leon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 9:56:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2019 12:11:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/7/2019 7:08:00 AM
Splendid writing dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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Date: 1/7/2019 7:10:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/6/2019 11:36:00 AM
This is great Sunshine well done my friend
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:13:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/6/2019 9:55:00 AM
nicely done, Sunshine, a great job on the Fibonacci verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:13:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/6/2019 5:28:00 AM
What a wonderful depth in your expressions of a cold where even tears freeze- Unknown in wilderness without qualification, even tears freeze to ice crystals". Beautiful and touching. My good wishes for your contest entry dear friend. With best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:11:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Ravindra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/6/2019 3:08:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, Stunning imagery and deep content. Great write for the contest theme. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:11:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/6/2019 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! A captivating poem! :)
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:10:00 PM
- Many thanks Chantelle Anne, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2019 10:48:00 PM
Yes, even tears can freeze. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:10:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2019 8:12:00 PM
Awesome, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:09:00 PM
- Many thanks Tania, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2019 7:37:00 PM
Returning with congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your evocative poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~ Susan
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2019 6:43:00 PM
Unbelievable to me how you fit 21 syllables on the last line. I could not finish mine last night because of that!!
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:08:00 PM
- I will look for your suggestion ... a difficult line :)
Date: 1/5/2019 6:43:00 PM
and big congrats on POTD
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:06:00 PM
- Many thanks Andrea, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2019 4:01:00 PM
A beautiful choice for POTD Anne-Lise! Congratulations on the honor! xxoo : )
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:06:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/5/2019 11:11:00 AM
I didn't understand this one at first, but after I read a few of the comments, I had an aha moment and find it superb and insightful! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:06:00 PM
- Many thanks Sunlite, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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