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- Energy and Solar System -

I am looking for myself in the center of my own solar system The thoughts just drifts with the wind The senses are united with the truth Life forms my heart Childhood memories in my soul wonderful happiness Blue as the sky and as a coral sea How the ocean reflects sunset colors game The night may let me in in a world where the stars play I can not explain it but it warms me and makes me whole 13.09.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thanks for my 6th place in the contest :)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2015 7:02:00 PM

thank you for the comment on my comment...PD

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2015 3:52:00 AM

- Just a pleasure, Linda :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 10:59:00 AM

Wish you happy new year and congrats on the win, Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 11:07:00 AM

- Dr. Ram, thank you :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2015 9:12:00 AM

such a beautiful calming write- many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 11:06:00 AM

- Jan, thank you :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/1/2015 7:59:00 AM

Very beautiful. Congratulations on your win and Happy New Year Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 8:01:00 AM

- Brenda, thank you :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/31/2014 9:38:00 PM

Congratulations Anne Lise on your win and best wishes in the new year!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 5:25:00 AM

- A contest I had forgotten - but pleasant with an 6th place - thank you, Maurice :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/31/2014 9:16:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win and happy new year my friend Anne...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 5:25:00 AM

- A contest I had forgotten - but pleasant with an 6th place - thank you, Kayod5 :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/31/2014 8:58:00 PM

Anne,, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2015 5:24:00 AM

- A contest I had forgotten - but pleasant with an 6th place - thank you,Linda :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/14/2014 7:16:00 PM

Something's don't need to be explained... and other's are more beautiful for the not-knowing... well penned!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2014 2:51:00 AM

- Timothy, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tarek Hassan

Date: 9/30/2014 1:30:00 PM

loveling feeling poem,wonderous moments of harmony with the cosmos

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2014 1:32:00 PM

- Tarek, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/23/2014 11:15:00 PM

Such a vast place to seek one's self; we're all there, from time-to-time.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2014 3:10:00 AM

- M.L, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/18/2014 8:18:00 AM

Such a serene and calming feel to this one. So peaceful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 8:57:00 AM

- Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/17/2014 9:32:00 AM

Your poem emanates such calm. Beautiful Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2014 11:25:00 AM

- Brenda, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/16/2014 10:03:00 AM

Wow! a deep contrasting philosophy heard from you simply. Excellently done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2014 12:09:00 PM

- bl, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/15/2014 12:08:00 PM

the memories of past that built us as whole... that what makes this world colorful... enjoyed reading your magical poem!!! and how I love to see your avatar visiting my home.. :)thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2014 12:12:00 PM

- Yes, it's true my friend AiyaH - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/15/2014 3:57:00 AM

Once again a beautiful writing from Anne... Thumbs Up

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2014 8:35:00 AM

- Malik, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/14/2014 6:36:00 PM

Lovely poem, Anne-Lise! Very well written and expressed. Love, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 6:55:00 PM

- Annalise , thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2014 2:34:00 PM

I like the premise of this piece and how well you expressed it. Well written!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 2:39:00 PM

- Richard, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2014 1:29:00 PM

"The night may let me in in a world where the stars play I can not explain it"..I really like these lines..A very warm work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 1:35:00 PM

- Dear Sara, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/14/2014 12:57:00 PM

just another great poem. as an aside I love your name Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 1:34:00 PM

- Maurice, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bianca And Gerhard

Date: 9/14/2014 7:54:00 AM

this is awesome , yes I feel the growing of a soul in depths of universe Anne Lise !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 1:33:00 PM

- Always look on the bright side of life :))) - B & G, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/14/2014 1:53:00 AM

Wow amazingly beautiful Anne Lise! Love ur poem much!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 5:59:00 AM

- Dr. Upma, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2014 1:09:00 AM

this one is really cool!!! I sure enjoyed reading it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 5:59:00 AM

- Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chris G. Vaillancourt

Date: 9/13/2014 10:03:00 PM

Nice image driven piece, great work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 5:59:00 AM

- Chris, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/13/2014 9:11:00 PM

gentle lady, gentle vision, gentle poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 6:00:00 AM

- Frederic, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/13/2014 8:15:00 PM

Your center stands in a beautiful world of poetic words, sun shining upon each day and life streaming forth. Rejoice, life stirs well within your heart! Great write!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 5:22:00 AM

- Above all, people must learn to love themselves and their lives - Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)