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(Old barn, once-a-time lives; rrj 070714 end):

- Dust By Ancient Times -

Old dust by rusty memories
One time lace curtains in the windows
Fascinating account by a challenging life
Happiness and defeats, sunny days and freezing nights
More than an adventure; for better or worse
An image that evokes old childhood memories for many
"The happy 50s" an expression of relief that the war was over
An aura by joy and optimism ... the future









   19.11.2016 
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Date: 12/8/2016 7:27:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2016 3:01:00 AM
- Darlene, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)
Date: 12/1/2016 6:58:00 PM
A time that was different. Nicely done on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 12/2/2016 3:06:00 AM
- A pleasure to see you Phyllis, thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/28/2016 4:00:00 PM
Real beautiful read... ~phatt
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2016 3:05:00 AM
- Phatt, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/26/2016 1:15:00 AM
Kind a sand poem, however, very enjoyed read and pithy.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2016 11:10:00 AM
- Many thanks Abdullah, for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/25/2016 11:20:00 PM
Old dust by rusty memories One time lace curtains in the windows Fascinating account by a challenging life Happiness and defeats, sunny days and freezing nights More than an adventure; for better or worse....... nice composition.... congrats on being featured..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2016 11:08:00 AM
- Bernard, thanks for nice visit, congrats and valuable comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2016 7:55:00 AM
The imagery is great, thank you for sharing :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2016 11:10:00 AM
- Many thanks Edward, for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2016 10:34:00 AM
Beautiful images Anna-Lise: Congrats on having your poem featured on the home page this week. Hugs, SuZ
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2016 11:08:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit, congrats and valuable comments SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2016 7:47:00 AM
What an amazing time it must have, you have captured its enthusiasm well.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2016 11:06:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and valuable comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2016 3:45:00 PM
what wonderful images you evoke in your lines - life was so much simpler then and despite the hardships I guess people were healthier and probably happier than many are today:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2016 3:21:00 AM
- No "happy pills" ... a new future to meet with joy :) - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2016 12:43:00 PM
love the photo and love the poem, Anne-Lise, a7. Check out my Butterfly shape I am learning slowly but surely :) hugs Eve
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2016 1:09:00 PM
- Thanks for enjoyable visit a 7 and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2016 12:36:00 PM
Sweet memories of a much simpler time.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2016 1:08:00 PM
- A computer free world ... and save money under the pillow ... much easier :) - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2016 11:30:00 AM
A superb beauty lurks in this wonderful poem dear friend. Time always slips from our fingers but the sweet memories of some such golden time always live in our memories. Great poem dear friend. I am marking it as my favorite one also and thank you for your visit on my new poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2016 12:33:00 PM
- Hi Ravindra, many thanks for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - Especially thanks for your "fav."... it pleases me much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2016 3:50:00 AM
Oh Ann Lise I remember this so well, beautiful generation, I was born in the early 40's so by time I was nearly a teenager it was the 50's, I always think the 50's and 60's was the best generation ti grow up in, thank you for sharing this remarkable little Verse and take care.....Vera
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2016 12:30:00 PM
- Much joy and rock and roll ... the young ladies with short dresses ... stylish men with greasy shiny cream in the hair ... surely a great time, dear Vera :) - A pleasure to see you, thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2016 4:38:00 PM
Sometimes I wish I was part of that generation, times are rusted but memories remain. Very nice poem and pic, hugs ;)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2016 12:24:00 PM
- You are young :) - A pleasure to share with you, Casarah :) - thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2016 3:26:00 PM
A beautifully crafted poem, Anne-Lise. I got a fond memory of 50's, I was born in that decade. Ha ha ha. Lovely poem though. Many love and blessings to you.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2016 3:31:00 PM
- All children of love was born in the happy 50s :))) - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2016 2:55:00 PM
ohh, we are part of what had happened in the past... superbly expressed work with much positivism, dear anne... happy weekend huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2016 3:28:00 PM
- Many thanks Nette, for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2016 1:32:00 PM
A great picture and a fantastic poem xx
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Date: 11/19/2016 1:40:00 PM
- Glad you liked my poem, thank you - Always a pleasant visit and lovely comments from you, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2016 11:43:00 AM
That last line is culminates your thoughts so aptly, my dear. We are tied to the past. Thank you for sharing this nostalgic piece. Hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2016 1:37:00 PM
- I think they were more happy at that time, dear Eileen - Many thanks for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2016 10:47:00 AM
A breeze of fascinating memories of beauty and of optimism for the future! A fine writing dear, Anne-Lise! Hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2016 1:32:00 PM
- I'm not so opptimistisk for today's future, my friend - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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