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- Desert - So Far the Eye Can See -

Sahara the world's largest - the strictest and warmest desert It is an ocean without water - a place of fear blast knuckles on the desert floor Eight nomads on camels shrouded in white cloth - only the eyes are visible How can they find their way in a landscape without trails - no horizon Once again the sun set - the camels will create nearly invisible tracks in the sand The sand dunes are changing during the day Experience the unusual beauty and exotic charm There is so much that amazes and impresses The hot sand is like flour and make the sky yellow misty and foggy solar disk And the air quivers with intense heat - sand glistens in wonderful colors 15.09.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Contest Name : IN THE DESERT Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Deadline: 10/14/2014 - Thank you for my 7th place in the contest -

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/27/2014 6:51:00 PM

Hello Anne Lise... you certainly paint a picture with words here. Even in the harshest conditions, somehow life goes on. Thank you Anne Lise... Lindsay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2014 4:28:00 AM

- Lindsay, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem :- Desert - So Far The Eye Can See - ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Adithya Yogesh

Date: 11/9/2014 6:29:00 PM

Fantastic word choice, and wonderful imagery. good job!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2014 2:36:00 AM

- Adithya, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem :- Desert - So Far The Eye Can See - ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/24/2014 5:46:00 PM

You have an eye for detail, I enjoyed the scene you painted. However I shouldn't stay too long - being part Irish and VERY pale. Have a good day, my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2014 6:12:00 AM

- Timothy, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem :- Desert - So Far The Eye Can See - ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/1/2014 1:56:00 PM

so very beautifully painted piece anne lise excellent pen dear friend

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/1/2014 2:36:00 PM

a pleasure to read bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2014 2:01:00 PM

- Liam I have started to read: Princess Philomena 1 + 2 + 3 .... I will get back to you later - Thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem :- Desert - So Far The Eye Can See - ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/27/2014 11:53:00 AM

A beautiful and yet dangerous place to be in. You describe it perfectly in this poem. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:55:00 AM

- Phyllis, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem :- Desert - So Far The Eye Can See - ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 9/22/2014 7:47:00 PM

Anne Lise that is such a beautiful piece of poetry, I could just picture the hot sand under my feet and looking for water, I do love poetry that can put pictures in my mind, thank you for sharing my dear, take care............Vera..............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2014 2:48:00 AM

- Vera,thanks for your nice visit and comments on my poem :- Desert - So Far The Eye Can See - ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/22/2014 3:47:00 PM

So unique I enjoyed it very much! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2014 2:47:00 AM

- Debbie, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/22/2014 7:37:00 AM

A wonderful poem, great images the keep the reader reading, grats on your win:) hugs xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2014 8:55:00 AM

- Casarah, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Mohn

Date: 9/21/2014 8:34:00 PM

Congrats Anne Lise...love the "quivering air"...terrific image

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2014 2:52:00 AM

- David, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2014 3:50:00 PM

amazing imagery Anne lise many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2014 2:52:00 AM

- Jan, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/21/2014 11:41:00 AM

Congrats on your win my friend!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:50:00 AM

- Robert, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2014 2:05:00 AM

Way to go, Ann Lise!!!Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:50:00 AM

- Andrea, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/21/2014 12:18:00 AM

Captivating tale Anne Lise! Wonderful win, huge congrats dear!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:50:00 AM

- Dr. Upma, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Trichet

Date: 9/20/2014 9:09:00 PM

Congratulations Anne Lise, a story to behold - enchanting

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:49:00 AM

- Mark, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/20/2014 8:07:00 PM

Just back to congratulate you on your winning poem Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:49:00 AM

- Brenda, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2014 3:35:00 PM

not only do I see the creative effort but also the beauty of this piece... anne, proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:48:00 AM

- Nette, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/20/2014 11:46:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, Very informative and pleasant poem. Very nice win. Congratulations. Now I need a very tall glass of ice water and some air conditioning. Thank you for commenting on my poem earlier. Have a great week end. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:48:00 AM

- Earl, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 9/20/2014 7:25:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2014 11:47:00 AM

- Kayod5, thanks for visiting and congrats - oxox // Anne-Lise :)