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loneliness, alone, depressed, sad, waiting, girl, sea

When the clouds are thick and the sky is gray Conceded by pain, from the eye it will flow tears Should have known, but could not find the reality A journey through her soul, you taught her to stand in the storm Consciousness ripples along the back ... quiet and invisible The sea is calm, as death black silk ribbon 31.03.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 4/2/2017 1:05:00 AM
Dear Anne. Good Morning. If I could give you and your entry more than a 7 I would. My goodness this entry along with your words are outstanding. Your words spoke to me in a very strong way. Be proud of your execution and creation here Anne. I very much understood and enjoyed your work. Well done entirely.
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Date: 4/4/2017 12:19:00 PM
- Many thanks for your great comments a 7 and friendly visit, Lisa - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2017 7:18:00 PM
There are some really awesome lines in this piece Anna-Lise! My favourite is: you taught her to stand in the storm. 7 ; )
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Date: 4/4/2017 12:19:00 PM
- Connie, many thanks for your great comments a 7 and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2017 4:33:00 PM
I am moved by the contrasting images on which the poem revolves, Anne-Lise. Dark, black and stormy are not strong enough to squash her resolve! #7 Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/4/2017 12:18:00 PM
- Many thanks for your great comments a 7 and friendly visit, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2017 3:44:00 AM
Beautiful piece of poetry I could feel the sadness and the positivity, lovely picture also, Roy. :))
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:47:00 PM
- Roy, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2017 2:16:00 AM
Impressive deep writing dearest, Anne-Lise. A 7 my friend. Hugs!
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:46:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2017 10:26:00 PM
Your words flow smoothly and sets the pace for this poem, one solitude and profound sadness. Emile.
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:45:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2017 9:48:00 PM
Wow Anne-Lise, in a word Awesome, for the penned words, the visual, everything about it. A7+
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:45:00 PM
- Many thanks Maria, for friendly visits a 7 + and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2017 4:09:00 PM
Anne-Lise, this is a delicious poem. The picture is perfect accompaniment. Tim is right - what a great line: "you taught her to stand in the storm." I think it's also a very crucial line - this is the positive anchor of the poem, and even as we then consider things quiet and invisible, and "death black silk ribbon" (which, though beautiful, seems sad) we have that sense that things are good.
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:44:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Doug :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2017 12:07:00 PM
Wow Anne-Lise :-) Beautiful poetry. I love the emotion, imagery, this is a beauty a fave, 7+ blessings xxx enjoy a peaceful weekend.
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:43:00 PM
- Many thanks Lynn, for friendly visits a 7 + fav. and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2017 9:20:00 AM
I love the line you taught me to stand in the storm...beautiful A-L
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:42:00 PM
- Tim, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2017 8:57:00 AM
Really cool Anne-Lise. This comes across as a whisper on a cold breeze, something you hear in the dead of night while all is still. Your poetic voice is haunting in this wonderful piece.
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:41:00 PM
- Many thanks Chris, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)