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Ghost In Love



The wolves howling at the height of his past life

As a strangled breath from the grave

The air feels heavy and smells rotten soil

He never forgot his great love

The woman who was his passion

Links and bells chime in the wind

The taste of vintage wine

His blood rushes through a gloriously red rose

The last restraint is gone

If death is a caress, what is life ?

His bride will be transported on a white horse












- 07.08.2016
  Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 8/29/2016 7:55:00 AM
Most Excellent Dear Anne-Lise (also known as "Sister Grimm")!! Congratulations on POTW!! I missed this one, but I'm glad I got to it now!! I can fully see and realize now that the curse of the "Brothers Grimm" (Liam and me) has fully affected you now, which is good. You do very well with the Macabre!! The message and the imagery of this free verse is perfect. And, I really like your choice of attached pictures with the skeleton and holding the "red rose." SEVEN/FAV!! Best!! Sister Grimm!! GB
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:40:00 PM
- Thank you, Brother Grimm - Highly appreciate your visit a 7 + fav. and comments :) - hugs //Sister Grimm :)
Date: 8/22/2016 4:11:00 PM
A cute pen used to draw this beautiful poem. Congrats on POTD my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Date: 8/23/2016 6:04:00 AM
- Greatly appreciate your comment and visit - Many thanks for congrats, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/20/2016 1:54:00 PM
Love this - Congrats on the POTW.
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Date: 8/20/2016 2:27:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/18/2016 1:33:00 AM
wonderful poem with sharp pen .Congrats dear..well deserved.
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Date: 8/18/2016 8:27:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Nilima :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/17/2016 12:05:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on poem of the week:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/17/2016 2:28:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/17/2016 11:15:00 AM
Very nice, I enjoyed the poem. It didn't seem as full of emotion as I first thought until I was done reading. Thank you , enjoyed very much. :)
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Date: 8/17/2016 2:27:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visit and your comments, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/15/2016 3:59:00 PM
How wonderful! Back to say congratulations on POTW. YEA!!!
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Date: 8/16/2016 7:02:00 AM
- .....YEA !!!!! :)))) - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/15/2016 8:25:00 AM
Lovely write and smell of romance even dark...Congrats Sunshine. Love Sunita :)
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Date: 8/15/2016 12:41:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/14/2016 11:36:00 AM
POTW!!!! You should write deep and dark more often Anne Lise!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:28:00 PM
- ............. I was born on the brightest side of the year :)))) -Thank you for the lovely comments and visits, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/14/2016 7:39:00 AM
The last restraint, life? Pretty heavy duty write Anne-Lise. Congratulations on POTW honors...
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Date: 8/14/2016 7:52:00 AM
- I must say ...... WONDERFUL SURPRISE - Thanks, Charlie ..... wooooow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/12/2016 1:42:00 AM
"If death is a caress, what is life ?" - what a question to ponder!!!! Lovely write:)
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:27:00 AM
- Jo, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 10:22:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, this is definitely different from your pen. A little darker than usual and excellent writing. I love the content in this one. This is really good my friend. It definitely holds the attention from beginning to end. This shows your all round talent in poetic prowess. This is a definite seven and a fave Anne-Lise. Have a good day. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/9/2016 2:13:00 PM
- Wow, thanks for the visit, a 7+ fav. and a great comments from you Mike - Very much appreciated it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/9/2016 1:03:00 AM
very interesting and mysterious poem Anne-Lise... Great job.
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Date: 8/9/2016 6:15:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Becca :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2016 1:46:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is dark and mysterious. Although it's different from you normally write, it's very good. -7:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/8/2016 2:07:00 PM
- Yes, a little change :))) - Thanks for friendly visit and great comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2016 9:25:00 AM
Well, not the kind of work that I would chose to read but you did a good job with the farside..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/8/2016 11:25:00 AM
- A ghost that never forgets his beloved ..... but, he gets her in the end ..... a kind of love story, Sara :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2016 5:13:00 AM
Otherworldly. Beautiful Anne-Lise
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:37:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/8/2016 1:16:00 AM
Glorious writing dear Anne-Lise. A huge seven!
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:36:00 AM
- Demetrios my friend, thanks for friendly visit a 7 and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2016 10:03:00 PM
Great poetry from the dark side Anne Lise. I love it. Your dark side kinda turns me on. LOL
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:35:00 AM
- Enjoyable you liked "my dark side", Daniel :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2016 7:29:00 PM
Mysterious and darker than your usual creations Anne-Lise. I enjoyed it, especially the imagery of the white horse. ; )
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:32:00 AM
- Connie, thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2016 3:53:00 PM
A wonderful poem A-L. I enjoyed seeing a deeper write from you.
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:31:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2016 3:19:00 PM
dark and deep Anne lise - am not used to seeing this side of your writing ... I like it!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2016 3:29:00 PM
- Changing a bit on topic, Jan :))) - Nice you like it ... thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2016 3:17:00 PM
Amazing write here. Maybe it's its not all sunshine and smiles in your library but even this poem left me with a good feeling thanks for writing !
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:30:00 AM
- Both light and dark sides in life :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Kyle - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/7/2016 2:44:00 PM
powerful, dark write so dramatically done, wow, anne... happy huggs!
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:31:00 AM
- Not a sunshine poem, Nette :) - Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)