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Oh now sad frog located on the sandy beach Emotions raging around the body as an Icelandic volcano burning holds in a vice grips deeply Stranded in the cemetery of broken hearts It is as if parts of the heart where torn out shreaded from the body without an anesthesia Deep arrow strikes in Golden Sunshine beams Maybe he worries for no reason Warm thoughts sail faraway yonder An endless sandy beach, white as snow washed with the blue ocean in brilliant yellow sunlight Singing dreams kissing lips hold an oasis close She drinks his kiss as if one could never get enough In the hot summer sun burning heart yearns It does not matter what it is or where it leads them as long as it creates an inner glow Singing sizzles relighting loves croaking flames Infatuation may be coming - but volatile ignites when paper lips hold tears prisoner Positively resonated does not appear out of the blue Falling salt seasoned spice Trail seeking light This is a powerful and invigorating moment Jumping angry to paradise Shedding the green shirt of a Queen She was cold, but the sun stroked her soft and warm over the cheeks Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 26.06.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 7/9/2015 9:01:00 AM
Liam, I commented already to Anne Lise and like I said this just a splendid poem which my eyes and imagination can feast on!!~Olive ELoisa =")
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Date: 7/7/2015 10:13:00 AM
Lots of luciuos imagery here fav line [when paper lips hold tears prisoner] Light & Love
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:27:00 PM
- Love it !!!! - I wish you a beautiful "summer" day, dear friend Liam! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/6/2015 4:39:00 AM
lovely storytelling from both of you with an ending that delights!.. huggs
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Date: 7/5/2015 6:27:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!A very beautifully written free verse poem by you my dearest friends.I sense a lot of sadness in this excellent piece,but well that could be only me and my own personal interpretation of it.Great imagery.Just dazzling.A very beautiful n' amazing poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.A real gem!Awesome collaboration!Enjoyed it.A 7+++ to each of you!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely day!Keep your faith Liam!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 7/5/2015 6:09:00 PM
what wonderful imagery Anne Lise and Liam - I just hope he doesn't get too dry in the sun and croak lol:-) love the title a great Pink Floyd track too:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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