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reflection... beautiful

No thoughts, no consciousness Echo the sound of strangled cry Can't escape Take my hand The dark dungeons without the breath of life Deeper than you can imagine Can't escape Take my hand Weak, so unbelievably weak The bitter cold darkness Can't escape Take my hand The death is so overwhelming The door without nameplate conquers the fear Can't escape Take my hand The sun goes down, deep unconsciousness The reality is that you are kapein on your own boat Can't escape Take my hand 04.05.2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :( Copyright © All Rights Reserved (unrhymed couplets) - My father-in-law died today - Bless his soul - Rest in peace - You are deeply missed "Bessen"

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James Inman

Date: 5/22/2018 10:06:00 PM

I see the beauty of your sorrow in your poem Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/23/2018 11:57:00 AM

- Thank you, James

Joseph May

Date: 5/9/2018 10:57:00 PM

So sorry for your loss Anne...My prayers are with you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2018 4:07:00 AM

- Thank you, Joseph

Charles Messina

Date: 5/9/2018 3:35:00 PM

So very sorry for your loss Anne-Lise, my condolences...A beautiful eulogy indeed. Prayers are sent to you and your loved ones.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 4:30:00 PM

- Thank you, Charles

Jean Murray

Date: 5/9/2018 11:36:00 AM

The sad grip of death. I too have felt it when I was a student nurse. How lovely you were there to hold his hand Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:47:00 PM

- Thank you, Jean

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 5/7/2018 4:15:00 AM

This is what life is, every soul has come from God and every soul must return to Him, every soul has to swallow this bitter taste of death, may your father in laws soul rest in peace, you have written a really beautiful poem telling that there s no escape of death, can t escape this is what death is, good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:46:00 PM

- Thank you, Faraz

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/7/2018 3:47:00 AM

What a fitting poem as a eulogy my dearest, Anne,-Lise. May he rest in peace! I wrote a small trilogy on death. ! I have already expressed my condolences my friend! God bless you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:46:00 PM

- Thank you, Demetrios

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2018 7:19:00 PM

so sorry to hear this, anne... a loving eulogy for your father-in-law... blessings!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:46:00 PM

- Thank you, Nette

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/5/2018 3:29:00 PM

Very Sorry for your loss Anne-Lise, R.I.P Beautiful words, ~~Niall xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:44:00 PM

- Thank you, Niall

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/5/2018 10:57:00 AM

Sorry for your loss Anne-Lise..The poetry is beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:44:00 PM

- Thank you, Harry

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/5/2018 8:11:00 AM

So sorry fron your loss Anne-Lise, Your powerful words express the deepest of emotions feelings, xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:44:00 PM

- Thank you, Mike

Maria Williams

Date: 5/5/2018 12:52:00 AM

So sorry to hear that Anne-Lise. My condolences to you and the family. May he rest in peace. An outstanding tribute of yours for him......Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:43:00 PM

- Thank you, Maria

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 5/4/2018 7:55:00 PM

So sorry to hear of your loss Anne-Lise. Beautiful words and thoughts in this ode to your father-in-law. May beautiful peace and love be his for all time. Love to you and yours at this sad time.Leanne x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2018 2:43:00 PM

- Thank you, Leanne