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- Blame It On the Moon -

The night was young Full moon and a beautiful sight With a luminous silvery glow The shadow of two silhouettes in the moonlight Hand in hand in the romance of a path Both so ignorant and naive An innocent romance Nothing is more beautiful Moon enchanted them both There was something in the air Their hearts were in turmoil He looks deep into her eyes Then he stole her first kiss 24.10.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 12/12/2013 5:47:00 PM

I enjoy poems depicting the night, especially the lights of night, which primarily is the moon. I liked this poem a lot. Great work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2013 5:48:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Wayland. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/8/2013 9:40:00 PM

Ahh, the innocence of first love from the brilliance of Anne lise! Made my night!! chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2013 2:41:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jay Loveless

Date: 11/26/2013 11:24:00 PM

I agree with Kileem's comment ;) I loved this write Anne, it was beautiful and charming, romantic and sweet. And I shall surely Blame it on the moon <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 2:59:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Jay. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kileem Al Lishmiin

Date: 11/20/2013 9:57:00 AM

Funny how even the innocent steal. Without theft, we might not truly enjoy what we have, though.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2013 10:37:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Kileem Al. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cecil Hickman

Date: 11/20/2013 12:03:00 AM

very tenderly written and your words reminded me of my first kiss, ever so long ago. Thank you for your visits to my words and leaving a piece of your heart and mind behind,,,blessings Cecil

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2013 3:24:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Cecil. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kj Force

Date: 11/13/2013 8:51:00 PM

anne...your words painted the picture in my mind..great job..of loves' innocence.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2013 2:50:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, kj. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/10/2013 5:17:00 PM

A descriptive beautiful poem of a full moon and young love. Thank you for your comment on my Autumn child

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2013 5:30:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Ralph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/9/2013 11:06:00 AM

thanks anna for dropping by and reading my poems.. ^_^ I really appreciate that you take time to read them and more you drop encouraging comments for me to write more.. :) your poems are as well nice.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2013 11:19:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Olive. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jae Airgead

Date: 11/4/2013 1:50:00 AM

Wow, I really love this, sweet and to the point but alluring as well! Well done! :) -Has

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2013 4:37:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Jae. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jae Airgead
Date: 11/4/2013 1:52:00 AM

*Jae Silly autocorrect

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 11/3/2013 2:05:00 AM

(Informally Reviewed) Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/3/2013 5:35:00 AM

:)))))

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 11/3/2013 2:01:00 AM

(Informally Reviewed) Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/3/2013 5:35:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you M.S.H. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/2/2013 11:35:00 AM

Oh, this summoned some memories--feelings more than thoughts, and I appreciate the chance you gave me to revisit them. Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2013 12:24:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson

Date: 11/1/2013 2:24:00 PM

Lovely romantic poem. Very best wishes Linda x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/1/2013 2:57:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem,Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 11/1/2013 2:42:00 AM

Oh Anne, this one should do well in that contest!!! Very nice, good luck!!! MC

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/1/2013 2:43:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem,Marquis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/31/2013 8:38:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic :3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2013 8:45:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem,Jay. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/29/2013 5:46:00 PM

How beautifully romantic! Who would not fall in love in this kind of setting? This is a wonderful piece of poetry, Anne Lise! Very nicely written! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the kind comments, as always!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2013 5:47:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Posey

Date: 10/29/2013 5:45:00 AM

Anne, I thoroughly enjoyed this morning read. Creative and tender treatment of a moment to remember. Good luck in the contest.... Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2013 5:59:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Jake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/27/2013 3:44:00 PM

Cute one, Anne. Aww young love - such a dreamy composition. I enjoyed immensely. Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2013 3:47:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Laura. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/27/2013 10:29:00 AM

wow!! so romantic...perfect night for lovers ;) good luck friend Anne ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2013 10:50:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ferry

Date: 10/26/2013 11:17:00 PM

Great way to have your first kiss ,,Under a full moon....Something one will never forget.....Nice write Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2013 4:49:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/26/2013 3:26:00 PM

the new moon approaches, anne... may all you aspire for be fulfilled.. a lovely write; wow.. saturday greetings to you..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2013 3:29:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/26/2013 1:37:00 PM

Jealous the moon certainly was having witnessed such a romantic scene! Good luck dear Anne Lise! Beautifully done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2013 1:39:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/26/2013 12:33:00 PM

Bravo! We were all young once... Brings back memories!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2013 12:44:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Carol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 10/26/2013 9:36:00 AM

Beautiful sight, Anne-Lise. Love it. Have an awesome weekend and enjoy that moon :).

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2013 11:20:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Toquyen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/26/2013 9:18:00 AM

Entrancing!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2013 11:19:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Jake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)