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- Black Love -

Morning glory
                                               The body is blunt
                                               Thinking of you
                                               before I awake
                                               Stretching my body
                                               Eyes are closed
                                               Can feel your scent
                                               Gently open my eyes
                                               Feel your aroma                                      
                                               The taste on my lips
                                               As a soft kiss                                       
                                               Your scent fills the room
                                               Thought of you,
                                               makes me awake
                                               You are perfect
                                               Heats my body
                                               Embracing you 
                                               Tasting you ... gently                         
                                               A moment of pleasure
                                               Without cream
                                               Without sugar
                                               Black morning coffee




09.06.2013

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Alexis Y. Date: 12/11/2016 10:29:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/12/2016 4:59:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/11/2016 5:00:00 PM With closed then opened eyes, taking in the senses! Thank you for entering my contest and congrats, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/12/2016 4:58:00 PM - Thanks for my win, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen Date: 5/4/2015 5:34:00 PM Very great,interesting poem Great work. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/5/2015 2:46:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Afolabi - greatly appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/2/2014 7:00:00 PM one last thing.....s e v E N! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2014 5:55:00 AM - Thank you, JSL !!!!

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/2/2014 6:59:00 PM what a little roller coaster you took me on with a trick ending! You sneak! Well, sadly, it is dinner time and I gtg, for now. I will be back to read more ASAP! Hope I didn't annoy the hell out of you tonite! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2014 5:54:00 AM - I'm pleasantly surprised :))) - You've spent a lot of time on my poems - Highly appreciate your visit JSL !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin Date: 1/1/2014 9:56:00 AM Your writing is a wake up call! I'm headed to Starbucks! 7 hugs, chuck Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/1/2014 11:28:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Chuck - greatly appreciate your comments! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Nwabeke Date: 9/23/2013 10:07:00 AM I bet this poem has drowned me in a sea of LOVE scented air. Bravo! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/23/2013 10:21:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Victor. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Ramacher Date: 8/31/2013 5:09:00 AM And here I thought I was the only poet who loved coffee enough to write about it, hahaha. Join the coffee club! We are talking coffee right? Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2013 5:17:00 AM - Yes, black coffee my friend :)))) I will join the "coffee Club"- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Sandra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Scott Date: 8/23/2013 12:02:00 PM LOVE YOUR WRITE MATE VERY CLEVER METAPHORES USED VERY SENSUAL TOO XXX DAVIDSCOTT THANKS FOR YOUR LOVLY WORDS ON MINE Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2013 12:04:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/9/2013 9:53:00 PM I am liking this poem very much..... sweet and good taste.... PD Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/10/2013 2:19:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Linda, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 6/21/2013 9:49:00 PM Did not catch the title tell the end. Nicely done on this romantic piece. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/7/2013 4:36:00 PM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Phyllis, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andy Ellsworth Date: 6/20/2013 1:08:00 PM I've liked all of your writes... but this one is dear to my heart. Enjoying my second cup of the morning. No cream, no sugar. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/20/2013 2:18:00 PM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Andy, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sapna Beriwal Date: 6/20/2013 1:19:00 AM you proved it 'love has fragrance'....keep writing in all phases of life. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/20/2013 1:20:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Sapna, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jane Smith Date: 6/19/2013 5:51:00 PM Wow. I really like it! Thank you for the welcoming. Your poem is very creative. Also, could you help me with what kinds of poems I have? i never know what to call them so i say blank verse. Ill look forward to seeing more of your poems. I also made another poem if you'd like to read it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/20/2013 12:44:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Cassidy, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherie Thomas Date: 6/18/2013 4:55:00 PM I love this write anne.....really cool!!!:) lol I like my coffee light and sweet... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/19/2013 2:05:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Cherie, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/18/2013 7:57:00 AM Anne Lise; I love your poem, but I like my coffee with cream and sugar. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/18/2013 9:37:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Lucilla !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey Date: 6/16/2013 7:48:00 PM Oh my... you really love your coffee... ha ha... so well written that I was thinking anything BUT coffee. Seductive :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/17/2013 2:57:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Karen !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard D Seal Date: 6/14/2013 7:25:00 PM Very cheeky poem Anne Lise, leading me up the garden path for ....... a coffee lol. very good write and funny. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/15/2013 1:53:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Richard !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Morrison Date: 6/14/2013 9:58:00 AM Until this very moment I never thought of my morning coffee as sexy. Perhaps I should try drinking it black! What A Excellent Write! Kim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/14/2013 10:22:00 AM - Black is sexy, Kim !!! - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Kim !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Rose Date: 6/14/2013 9:17:00 AM Sexy coffee haha! Next time I have a cup I will be sure to drink it more sensually, like a crazy love affair :) Love your work! I wish I could write like this. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/14/2013 10:21:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Andrea !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 6/14/2013 12:14:00 AM Made me smile, have to introduce you to the sins of Tim Hortons!!!!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/14/2013 1:32:00 AM Who is: T.Hortons ? - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Arthur!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Annie Lander Date: 6/12/2013 1:27:00 PM We all need that Black Love in the morning and sometimes throughout the day thank you for the wake up.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2013 1:28:00 PM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Annie !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz Date: 6/12/2013 10:42:00 AM It is the hymn to black coffee I prefer because it is involving and full of luxury too. A lot of fantasy and of good humour Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2013 10:44:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Mario !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda Date: 6/12/2013 7:16:00 AM This poem uses all the body senses-- clever too. Loved it X Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2013 7:17:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Kim !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/11/2013 11:07:00 PM oooh, what a cool way to say it, black love!! Creative. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2013 1:20:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Andrea!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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