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rail rails and nude feet butterflies, rocks, soil and plants - ... going to grandma's heart on a paper he shed a tear - but no more - ... goodbye - road darkens 18/10/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Senryu : 5-7-5

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Date: 10/26/2019 2:58:00 PM
Beautifyly penned PF
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Date: 10/26/2019 3:07:00 PM
- Thanks for your comment, Panagiota - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/22/2019 1:31:00 AM
Loved it... beautifully done...
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Date: 10/22/2019 1:31:00 PM
- Pashang, many thanks for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2019 2:28:00 PM
very nice, Anne Lise. And I like the picture with it.
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Date: 10/22/2019 1:30:00 PM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2019 1:28:00 PM
Hi my sweet friend, Poor little soul - such a cute write - grandmas's are very special - The Greeks say a grandchild is twice your child - the child feels this bond immediately. An absolute fav. i would love a grandchild - our two boys and their wives say they would feel sad to bring a child into this tumultuous world where in twenty to thirty years time people will be fighting for water - I understand and accept what they say but still sad that I will never have a grandchild! Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 10/20/2019 2:05:00 PM
- Give them time ... they will wish for a child or two in the future - You would have been a wonderful grandmother, my friend :) - Thank you very much for your visit, fave and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/19/2019 9:23:00 AM
my grandmother passed when i was 9, she was my rock....i would love to go back in time and visit her... love this, thanks for awakening memories :) hugs
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Date: 10/19/2019 1:13:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Date: 10/18/2019 9:57:00 PM
this is beautiful , Sunshine. I love it because it reminds me of my 1 year old grandson I've been sharing my life with. a fav. Hugs
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:46:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit, fave and your comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 7:43:00 PM
I miss going to grandmas. Enjoyed your words. Bless you sweet lady, Gina
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:46:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 4:55:00 PM
Gorgeous photo and equally gorgeous poem, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:46:00 AM
- Vijay, thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))
Date: 10/18/2019 1:19:00 PM
That is so cute. A wonderful little poem for those little folks who come to visit.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:45:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : ))

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