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- Angels For Your Soul -

                         A winter night where the stars will gleam
                              divinely touched with silver beam

                        Through the floorboards of heaven they sing
                          with sparkling white robe and folded wing

                           Cast fragrance in the dim morning light
                         moving rhythmically in synchronized bright

                          From the kingdom of the heavenly voice
                        the probability of their existence - your choice

                      There is room for a step between man and God
                     Pearlescent wing ornament bends under the sword

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2024

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Valsa George Date: 12/10/2024 7:24:00 PM Back to your poem to congratulate you on your well deserved win. I liked the poem as well as the image. Love and hugs, dear Anne ! Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 12/10/2024 12:03:00 PM Anne-Lise I adored your poem! The imagery was amazing and the word choice so melodic! Congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for entering! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/11/2024 5:52:00 AM - Thank you very much Karen, a pleasant surprise :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/4/2024 5:24:00 AM A pretty write! I can visualize through your imagery! Hugs :) Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 12/3/2024 10:41:00 AM A true divine poem. Loved it. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/3/2024 9:28:00 AM this is a beautiful entry in Karen's contest. Well done. Login to Reply

John Read Date: 12/3/2024 8:06:00 AM It gives me a nice feeling knowing a angel is watching over me. Wishing you well in the contest Anne. xx Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 12/3/2024 5:25:00 AM Anne-Lise, thanks for highlighting the mystery of this universe we're in, and for allowing for individual differences in belief. If everyone could accept this idea, global peace could prevail! Smiles! Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 12/3/2024 4:22:00 AM Dear anne lise this is such a soul warming and artistic poem woven with such captivating imagery and sublime rhymes; very well delivered in such a seamless manner. I especially love the opening and also how youv written “ with sparkling white robe and folded wing Cast fragrance in the dim morning light” just stunning and moving! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/3/2024 2:17:00 AM Stars gleam, and angels sing—perfect emotions for the Christmas season. Loved the idea of fragrance. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 12/2/2024 11:55:00 PM Your poem has lifted me up high into the heavens. I see angels dancing amid fluffy clouds and singing celestial songs. Lovely couplets and lovely image. All the best dear Anne. Love and hugs. Login to Reply

David Crandall Date: 12/2/2024 5:17:00 PM I'd like to sit on a cloud and let my eyes follow that silver beam through the floorboards of heaven to watch those angels dance and sing! When the time comes, I hope my soul follows. Magical poem! Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 12/2/2024 4:41:00 PM when you write about Angels you write about peace and love, dear poet Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2024 4:39:00 PM fabulous lines, we definitely need angels watching over us Anne-lise hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Anne E Sangster - K Date: 12/2/2024 2:19:00 PM Anne, your wonderful poem sings with angelic uplifting vibrations. Thank you for writing this. It was a pleasure to read :-) Oh, and I most definately believe in angels. They are our cosmic siblings that have evolved to higher realms of conciousness. Hugs and Smiles to you ~ Anne xox Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/2/2024 12:55:00 PM They say everyone has a guardian angel that watches over us. Well written Anne Lise, good luck in the contest. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/2/2024 1:10:00 PM - We all need an angel or two... with all the conflicts and wars going on in the world today, Tom - Thank you very much :) - hugs