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02.12.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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Couplet Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Karen Jones

2nd place in the contest

 

A winter night where the stars will gleam divinely touched with silver beam Through the floorboards of heaven they sing with sparkling white robe and folded wing Cast fragrance in the dim morning light moving rhythmically in synchronized bright From the kingdom of the heavenly voice the probability of their existence - your choice There is room for a step between man and God Pearlescent wing ornament bends under the sword

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Date: 12/10/2024 7:24:00 PM
Back to your poem to congratulate you on your well deserved win. I liked the poem as well as the image. Love and hugs, dear Anne !
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Date: 12/10/2024 12:03:00 PM
Anne-Lise I adored your poem! The imagery was amazing and the word choice so melodic! Congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for entering!
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Date: 12/11/2024 5:52:00 AM
- Thank you very much Karen, a pleasant surprise :) - hugs
Date: 12/4/2024 5:24:00 AM
A pretty write! I can visualize through your imagery! Hugs :)
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Date: 12/3/2024 10:41:00 AM
A true divine poem. Loved it.
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Date: 12/3/2024 9:28:00 AM
this is a beautiful entry in Karen's contest. Well done.
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Date: 12/3/2024 8:06:00 AM
It gives me a nice feeling knowing a angel is watching over me. Wishing you well in the contest Anne. xx
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Date: 12/3/2024 5:25:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for highlighting the mystery of this universe we're in, and for allowing for individual differences in belief. If everyone could accept this idea, global peace could prevail! Smiles!
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Date: 12/3/2024 4:22:00 AM
Dear anne lise this is such a soul warming and artistic poem woven with such captivating imagery and sublime rhymes; very well delivered in such a seamless manner. I especially love the opening and also how youv written “ with sparkling white robe and folded wing Cast fragrance in the dim morning light” just stunning and moving! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
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Date: 12/3/2024 2:17:00 AM
Stars gleam, and angels sing—perfect emotions for the Christmas season. Loved the idea of fragrance.
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Date: 12/2/2024 11:55:00 PM
Your poem has lifted me up high into the heavens. I see angels dancing amid fluffy clouds and singing celestial songs. Lovely couplets and lovely image. All the best dear Anne. Love and hugs.
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Date: 12/2/2024 5:17:00 PM
I'd like to sit on a cloud and let my eyes follow that silver beam through the floorboards of heaven to watch those angels dance and sing! When the time comes, I hope my soul follows. Magical poem!
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Date: 12/2/2024 4:41:00 PM
when you write about Angels you write about peace and love, dear poet
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Date: 12/2/2024 4:39:00 PM
fabulous lines, we definitely need angels watching over us Anne-lise hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2024 2:19:00 PM
Anne, your wonderful poem sings with angelic uplifting vibrations. Thank you for writing this. It was a pleasure to read :-) Oh, and I most definately believe in angels. They are our cosmic siblings that have evolved to higher realms of conciousness. Hugs and Smiles to you ~ Anne xox
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Date: 12/2/2024 12:55:00 PM
They say everyone has a guardian angel that watches over us. Well written Anne Lise, good luck in the contest. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
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Date: 12/2/2024 1:10:00 PM
- We all need an angel or two... with all the conflicts and wars going on in the world today, Tom - Thank you very much :) - hugs

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