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29.03.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Under massive beams fossils of our ancestors A piquant story Where life begins - Where it ends Evidence shattered to dust

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Date: 4/1/2025 10:10:00 AM
Anne-Lise, an interesting depiction of life. We come from some diverse families and that is our strength. Hard to imagine what life was like if we really go back far. Only fossil evidence. Thanks for making me think about this. Smiles!
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:48:00 AM
Some amazing history in these trees. Lovely wording Anne, well done . :)
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Date: 3/30/2025 8:48:00 AM
Your "Ancestors" is a wonderful write. Great Picture. Few words with much said. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Enjoy your blessed/fun day writing away..............
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Date: 3/30/2025 5:41:00 AM
Good one Anne-Lise to go with the picture. It begins in the dust and ends there.
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Date: 3/30/2025 4:04:00 AM
Wonderful weaving of words as always... Love that ending.. how sad..
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Date: 3/29/2025 1:15:00 PM
Yes, we have a weight of those gone on before, but they are part and parcel of who we turned out to be. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:36:00 AM
I guess the picture is of their 'family tree' good one Anne-Lise! hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:28:00 AM
Very good one. Also the pic is great.
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:11:00 AM
so deep and beautiful, we are our ancestors i guess, or will be enjoyed
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Date: 3/29/2025 9:17:00 AM
One day it will be our turn to be the ancestors, not too soon hopefully. Hope you're having a lovely weekend Anne-Lise. Tom
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